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Array ( [sid] => 91127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => close my eyes [time] => 2005-04-15 23:37:46 [hometext] => hey there [bodytext] => i close my eyes
in order to hide
the love i give
and you toss aside

i see you
see you seeing me
but never seeing
nor being

you try to say
that you really care
then why not a glance
or even a stare?

no more lies
no more deceit
i can see
that i can't defeat

i won't look at you
cause then i wont see
the love you give
to everyone but me

im done
im finished
im starting my life
that you've already blemished

my heartbreak is gone
i feel alright
just wait till the morning
when the sun is so bright

i hate the daylight
cause eyes open wide
just give me till then
to suck up my pride

morning has come
im doing fine
now yesterdays gone
and it is all so sublime...

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 232 [topic] => 2 [informant] => lil_noel09 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

close my eyes

Contributed by lil_noel09 on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 11:37:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

i close my eyes
in order to hide
the love i give
and you toss aside

i see you
see you seeing me
but never seeing
nor being

you try to say
that you really care
then why not a glance
or even a stare?

no more lies
no more deceit
i can see
that i can't defeat

i won't look at you
cause then i wont see
the love you give
to everyone but me

im done
im finished
im starting my life
that you've already blemished

my heartbreak is gone
i feel alright
just wait till the morning
when the sun is so bright

i hate the daylight
cause eyes open wide
just give me till then
to suck up my pride

morning has come
im doing fine
now yesterdays gone
and it is all so sublime...

Copyright Â© lil_noel09 ... [ 2005-04-15 23:37:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: close my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 04:15:44 AM AEST
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Nice poem and it flowed so well. I really felt what you were trying to say and it is hard to love someone who wont commit to just you. I like the ending it was well written. Thank you for your work….Steve

Re: close my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by english-pea-pelter on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:08:44 PM AEST
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hey,
was this about.. nevermind. nice poem..
much love,
your friend

Re: close my eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by sjoslin16 on Friday, 8th April 2011 @ 10:38:18 AM AEST
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beautifully written!! :)

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