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Array ( [sid] => 91118 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => RE to ''Eye of the Beholder'' [time] => 2005-04-15 21:25:37 [hometext] => this is a response to my friends poem [bodytext] => You say that i'm beautiful
you see the real me
but despite all your confidence
there are things you dont see
the reasons I deny
your profound accusations
is that when I'm near you
I know that those glistens those stares
are not aiming at me
they are going toward you
and YOUR beauty they see
that is why I do what I do
why I say what I say
so if i disagree i hope you read this
because who I want to be
is second best to thee

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RE to ''Eye of the Beholder''

Contributed by spazz911 on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:25:37 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

You say that i'm beautiful
you see the real me
but despite all your confidence
there are things you dont see
the reasons I deny
your profound accusations
is that when I'm near you
I know that those glistens those stares
are not aiming at me
they are going toward you
and YOUR beauty they see
that is why I do what I do
why I say what I say
so if i disagree i hope you read this
because who I want to be
is second best to thee

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-04-15 21:25:37]
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Re: RE to ''Eye of the Beholder'' (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:34:39 PM AEST
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god, casey, you dont understand. people do not look at me, and when they do its NOT in a good way. when they look at me theyre thinking... what a freak, look at those cuts on her arms... or what a poser or something like that. not that im beautiful or anything of the sort. im messed up, you know that. and stop denying what you are. you ARE beautiful inside AND out. please believe me on this. you say you're jealous of me, well im jealous of YOU. well im done now. just... believe me okay? luv u always, even though your a pain,
jennie*

Re: RE to ''Eye of the Beholder'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:11:58 PM AEST
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I'm sure both of you are getting many looks and i'm sure both of your are beautiful. Don't let what people say get to you... it drives you to do bad things. and don't say your a freak... you not. Just because you have been through pain doesnt make you a freak. I have scars on my arms but i'm still loved. So neither one of you worry about it. Everyone is beautiful.
Lauren

Re: RE to ''Eye of the Beholder'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:45:49 PM AEST
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I agree with Lauren. But if someone calls you a freak, say: "You say that like it's a BAD thing."
Remember that (to my knowledge) NO ONE said that being a freak was a bad thing. I consider myself a freak, but in a good way. I hope you know what I mean. Because Lauren is right when she says that you are BOTH beautiful.
See people for who they really are. And "do not be too eager to hand out death and judgement."
(Just a little quote from Lord Of The Rings there.)

This is a great poem. And poetry is a great way to let out your feelings without hurting anyone.
Keep up the good work, spazz911!

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