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Array ( [sid] => 9107 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => mommys gone,,,,, [time] => 2002-12-23 03:20:00 [hometext] => It's something that we all must live with,,
what if it was you,,to explain to your children,,how would we do it,,, [bodytext] => another rainy day,,has come,,,
another tear drops falls ,,
she will never know,,
if it's rain or tears,,,

blinded by dreams,,
hopeing to have,,
another christmas a family of one,,
will she be their,,

kids with smiles on their faces,,
joyous time has come,
unwrapped their presents,,
no mom around,,

we sit and remember ,
the times we had,,
some were good,,
some were bad ,,
but the tears still their,
as the raindrops fall,,

what do we tell the children,,
on special days like this,,
mommy loves you,,
and that she is near,,

I walk out side with tears in my eye's,,
rains drops fall ,,
to hide my deguise,,
what do I tell them,,

that mommy has died,,
merry christmas children,,
this is all I have to give,,
,,,me,,,,

craig s. meeks [comments] => 5 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 39 [informant] => spooky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

mommys gone,,,,,

Contributed by spooky on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 03:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

another rainy day,,has come,,,
another tear drops falls ,,
she will never know,,
if it's rain or tears,,,

blinded by dreams,,
hopeing to have,,
another christmas a family of one,,
will she be their,,

kids with smiles on their faces,,
joyous time has come,
unwrapped their presents,,
no mom around,,

we sit and remember ,
the times we had,,
some were good,,
some were bad ,,
but the tears still their,
as the raindrops fall,,

what do we tell the children,,
on special days like this,,
mommy loves you,,
and that she is near,,

I walk out side with tears in my eye's,,
rains drops fall ,,
to hide my deguise,,
what do I tell them,,

that mommy has died,,
merry christmas children,,
this is all I have to give,,
,,,me,,,,

craig s. meeks

Copyright © spooky ... [ 2002-12-23 03:20:00]
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Re: mommys gone,,,,, (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 05:00:18 AM AEST
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ohhh spooky this is so sad.....i dont know how to deal in these situation(maybe becoz i have no kids lol) its really hard to tell , but i guess u can make up the absence of their mommy ,so they won't notice much difference there's no mommy around
*tears in my eyes* watch it , im very sensitive and easy to cry so don't make such sad poems :(
10x for charing this one

Re: mommys gone,,,,, (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 10:53:01 AM AEST
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beautiful as always but very sad keep them coming your very talented

Re: mommys gone,,,,, (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 11:16:13 AM AEST
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Craig,this made me cry so hard I couldnt stop,I had to leave mt computer! You know that Ive lost my mom & my pain is still there!
This was such a beautiful poem!
It is very hard I can tell you this It was the hardest thing to deal with in my life & to tell my children! Christina

Re: mommys gone,,,,, (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 05:46:17 PM AEST
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Wow craig....this one made me cry real hard, it's hard knowing that one day i'll have to go through this as my mom is fixing to turn 61...this is going to be one hard time for me....i don't know what it's like to be without my mom.....i dont ever want to know but i know i will have to one day....thanks craig for sharing this one along with all your other poetry you sure do know how to tug at heart strings my friend...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: mommys gone,,,,, (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 07:20:08 AM AEST
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That broke my heart. Excellent poem. Kimmie_mac

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