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Array ( [sid] => 91063 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death from Love [time] => 2005-04-15 12:47:10 [hometext] => It says what you don't want to hear. comment please if you can. [bodytext] => This is a note full of tears, but yet I do not cry.
It’s a note to tell you I’m going to take my life.
The pain in my life runs to deep.
To make things better I’ll forever sleep.
She took my heart and left me in pain.
She thinks my life is just a game.
So its game over and we both lose.
I’m going to count to 10 and then its through

“ONE” God forgive me as I walk to my death.
“TWO” I guess Hell is where I’ll have to rest.
“THREE” You gave me this life so Your to blame.
“FOUR” God don’t care so its all the same.
“FIVE” I had it all, I had her love.
“SIX” She walked out of my life and left me this gun.
“SEVEN” Its time to shoot and then its done.
“EIGHT” No more need to hide, no need to run.
“NINE” Close my eyes, you got the guts,
Pull the trigger, you can’t ***** this up.
“TEN” Theirs no more hate and no more pain,
With a blast of sin I reach the end.

This is not a cry for help.
So if you find this note don’t come looking.
My life is gone and she’s the one who took it. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sride686 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Death from Love

Contributed by sride686 on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:47:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

This is a note full of tears, but yet I do not cry.
It’s a note to tell you I’m going to take my life.
The pain in my life runs to deep.
To make things better I’ll forever sleep.
She took my heart and left me in pain.
She thinks my life is just a game.
So its game over and we both lose.
I’m going to count to 10 and then its through

“ONE” God forgive me as I walk to my death.
“TWO” I guess Hell is where I’ll have to rest.
“THREE” You gave me this life so Your to blame.
“FOUR” God don’t care so its all the same.
“FIVE” I had it all, I had her love.
“SIX” She walked out of my life and left me this gun.
“SEVEN” Its time to shoot and then its done.
“EIGHT” No more need to hide, no need to run.
“NINE” Close my eyes, you got the guts,
Pull the trigger, you can’t ***** this up.
“TEN” Theirs no more hate and no more pain,
With a blast of sin I reach the end.

This is not a cry for help.
So if you find this note don’t come looking.
My life is gone and she’s the one who took it.

Copyright Â© sride686 ... [ 2005-04-15 12:47:10]
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Re: Death from Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:57:08 PM AEST
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it's powerful in its own way.

Re: Death from Love (User Rating: 1 )
by GurlyTye on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:05:41 PM AEST
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This is sad, i feel the need to say that no one is world your life. i know that sometimes it truly feels like there is no other way to escape the pain. but times does heal all. keep writting.

Re: Death from Love (User Rating: 1 )
by suicidal_imbecile on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:06:55 PM AEST
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it has the essence of a suicide note, but in a poetic way, awsome job

Re: Death from Love (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:17:24 PM AEST
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11 u took the 1st step in the right direction, u

wrote this essensial peice of writting, 12 u

now have a choice 2 make, give her back the

gun and u take back your life, wish u well . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Death from Love (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 04:09:12 PM AEST
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Thats such a sad write and yet i could so relate to this as so as other will.

You have writen such powerful emotions and im glad you where able to share it.

Jane

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