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Consumed in the darkness must I stay
My frail heart is fading away
Now dead in my bed must I lay

Weak and despaired and anguished am I
Cover my eyes so that I may cry
No one seeks to even ask me why
Why must I feel that I must die?

That question that lies so deep within me
But the answer washed away in the waves of the sea
Who can break my bonds to set me free?
But I know disappointment is all I can be

Forever in doubt I lie all alone
Kicked out of my house, kicked out of my home
Nothing but misery have I shown
I realize now that I’m on my own
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Washed Away

Contributed by blue_angel on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 11:34:56 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Fragile am I in the light of day
Consumed in the darkness must I stay
My frail heart is fading away
Now dead in my bed must I lay

Weak and despaired and anguished am I
Cover my eyes so that I may cry
No one seeks to even ask me why
Why must I feel that I must die?

That question that lies so deep within me
But the answer washed away in the waves of the sea
Who can break my bonds to set me free?
But I know disappointment is all I can be

Forever in doubt I lie all alone
Kicked out of my house, kicked out of my home
Nothing but misery have I shown
I realize now that I’m on my own

Copyright Â© blue_angel ... [ 2005-04-15 11:34:56]
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Re: Washed Away (User Rating: 1 )
by GurlyTye on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:07:38 PM AEST
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This is sad, but a very good write.

Re: Washed Away (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 07:48:11 PM AEST
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never give up i no wat ur going through i no ur parents r totally opresiveand well im here lean on me

Re: Washed Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:35:51 PM AEST
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you are never on your own. this was an excellent read, and i hope you stay around longer to post more to show others your brilliance.

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