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Array ( [sid] => 91055 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Painted Lady [time] => 2005-04-15 10:44:07 [hometext] => i'm not a prepy girl, and i'm not changing, Dedicated to all who would change me [bodytext] => a painted lady, a painted smile
living a dream, always in denial
you grab your brush,covered in lies
you move it towards me, no surprise
you would make me as you are
you would take away what i am
make us all the same and then the end

i'm not that easily hidden
your paint would run away
this is what i choice to be
you can't make what you want of me
i'm not like you, i won't hide away
under this facade, of dripping paint
your vanity is your lifes shame [comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Sonic_phoenix [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Painted Lady

Contributed by Sonic_phoenix on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:44:07 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

a painted lady, a painted smile
living a dream, always in denial
you grab your brush,covered in lies
you move it towards me, no surprise
you would make me as you are
you would take away what i am
make us all the same and then the end

i'm not that easily hidden
your paint would run away
this is what i choice to be
you can't make what you want of me
i'm not like you, i won't hide away
under this facade, of dripping paint
your vanity is your lifes shame

Copyright © Sonic_phoenix ... [ 2005-04-15 10:44:07]
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Re: Painted Lady (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:25:41 PM AEST
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Incredibly fierce, such power behind words so divine. Exquisite till the very end... No one should judge you or try to change you because they don't like how you dress or act or speak... I have this problem as well, my friend, you are not alone. They have yet to see the beauty that lies within... and the poets that we are... Beautiful, defiant, and dripping with talent. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful work of art with us. I have a poem that is similar, "You don't know me." Check it out some time, =). Flawless till the last word. All my love. Forever,

Your friend and fan,

Stephy. *Fleur*

Re: Painted Lady (User Rating: 1 )
by angryhippylibral on Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 09:50:53 PM AEST
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Oh it's very good!

I feel the same way: why change when you are happy being different? Origionality is the key!

Keep staying origional.

My favourite line is "your vanity of lifes shame". I really love the image it creates, and it's just so expressive, if that makes sense.

Hope you don't mind me saying, but you didn't capitalize some of the things you should have. ^__^

-Raven

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