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Array ( [sid] => 91036 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suffering heart [time] => 2005-04-15 06:21:34 [hometext] => Unleash my fury on her enemies! [bodytext] => My heart seethes with rage
it cuts to the skin
That life would be cruel
to one I call kin

The angel of blue
for her I do care
and forces of darkness
take me on if you dare

Why do you torture
her suffering heart
Why must you tear
her poor life apart

What has she done
that you treat her so rough
You cannot win
she is amazingly tough

Malevolent forces
whose actions are mean
Keep your hands off
this gal of fifteen

Show ME your fury
and I will not bend
I'll rip you apart
I'll tear and I'll rend

My swords are so sharp
I'll cleave you in half
My weapons are real
so don't even laugh

Our group is a family
this much is true
Leave her alone or
I'll destroy you

Oh, angel of blue
you we do need
don't let them win
this I do plead

Know this you evil
Know I won't rest
And beat you she will
she will pass the test

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Suffering heart

Contributed by Jaycee on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:21:34 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

My heart seethes with rage
it cuts to the skin
That life would be cruel
to one I call kin

The angel of blue
for her I do care
and forces of darkness
take me on if you dare

Why do you torture
her suffering heart
Why must you tear
her poor life apart

What has she done
that you treat her so rough
You cannot win
she is amazingly tough

Malevolent forces
whose actions are mean
Keep your hands off
this gal of fifteen

Show ME your fury
and I will not bend
I'll rip you apart
I'll tear and I'll rend

My swords are so sharp
I'll cleave you in half
My weapons are real
so don't even laugh

Our group is a family
this much is true
Leave her alone or
I'll destroy you

Oh, angel of blue
you we do need
don't let them win
this I do plead

Know this you evil
Know I won't rest
And beat you she will
she will pass the test

Copyright © Jaycee ... [ 2005-04-15 06:21:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suffering heart (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:41:03 PM AEST
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again, you find a way to make me smile. when no one seems to care (with a few exceptions), you write these poems that just... make me feel loved. thank you so much!
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: Suffering heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 03:14:48 PM AEST
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Awww JC..this is so very touching.... I love it.. as I'm sure Jennie does also.... This just goes to show what a caring man you are....

Crazy Jenni

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