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Array ( [sid] => 91025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Athiest [time] => 2005-04-15 02:22:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you took my dreams from me
and swore you would set me free
I changed my life for you
and you changed me

God my God help see
how am I to sore on these broken wigns
you changed me but I still feel
the numbing pain
my past its still here
take hold of me come set me free

I wanna be the one you want me to be
but I cant see what my future is in you
what is to come of me
help me become true

God my God set me free
how am I to sore on these broken wings
you changed me but I still feel
the numbing pain
my past its still here
take hold of me come set me free

you’ve broken me
im blind and I cant see
I ve gone back and thought about it all
but my clarity is gone
u made it this way
I must trust in your guidance
don’t fail me

God my God I all I have to offer is me [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 11 [informant] => static_fury [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

Athiest

Contributed by static_fury on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 02:22:28 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

you took my dreams from me
and swore you would set me free
I changed my life for you
and you changed me

God my God help see
how am I to sore on these broken wigns
you changed me but I still feel
the numbing pain
my past its still here
take hold of me come set me free

I wanna be the one you want me to be
but I cant see what my future is in you
what is to come of me
help me become true

God my God set me free
how am I to sore on these broken wings
you changed me but I still feel
the numbing pain
my past its still here
take hold of me come set me free

you’ve broken me
im blind and I cant see
I ve gone back and thought about it all
but my clarity is gone
u made it this way
I must trust in your guidance
don’t fail me

God my God I all I have to offer is me

Copyright Â© static_fury ... [ 2005-04-15 02:22:28]
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Re: Athiest (User Rating: 1 )
by persia on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:41:44 AM AEST
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I dont believe in God, i dont know what i believe but one thing i do say to believers is not to ask god for things, because when god dont give them it hurts. so therefore its best to see what he give you without you asking-it will probably more than what you would ask for!

-Thats just me! but good poem anyway it really shows your feelings towards god!

Persia

Re: Athiest (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 12:44:54 PM AEST
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this is a tight poem! i feel ya! lots o love, Kortnie

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