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Array ( [sid] => 91009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us [time] => 2005-04-14 22:35:13 [hometext] => Considered switching last 2 stanzas. Kinda thought it left the aura of us passing by @ the end. What do you think of that? the events that caused this poem using it's own format:-I wore pajamas/ He wore a suit/ I curled my hair while his lay flat/ [bodytext] => So very in love
It really shows
I see it-- feel it in our steps

It's adorable
The opposite
Attraction in our ev'ry day

All the questioning
Of why we are
Is oddly quaint-- enlightening

Oh how my heart flies
When I know that
There's no reas'ning, no stability

That you're loyal to
My flaws and fears
Our imbalance makes us whole

We're the strangest thing
Near paradox
For we're based on inhibitions

Our stability
Our binding glue
Lies in my insecurities

But it's beautiful
Nonsensical
Whimsy sets our spirits ablaze

I know they don't know
Don't understand
And that's gloriously perfect

It describes us well
Most certainly
That look upon each face we pass

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The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 10:35:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



So very in love
It really shows
I see it-- feel it in our steps

It's adorable
The opposite
Attraction in our ev'ry day

All the questioning
Of why we are
Is oddly quaint-- enlightening

Oh how my heart flies
When I know that
There's no reas'ning, no stability

That you're loyal to
My flaws and fears
Our imbalance makes us whole

We're the strangest thing
Near paradox
For we're based on inhibitions

Our stability
Our binding glue
Lies in my insecurities

But it's beautiful
Nonsensical
Whimsy sets our spirits ablaze

I know they don't know
Don't understand
And that's gloriously perfect

It describes us well
Most certainly
That look upon each face we pass





Copyright © liquidsunshine ... [ 2005-04-14 22:35:13]
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Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us (User Rating: 1 )
by lost13 on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 10:56:08 PM AEST
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i think it would be kinda neat if you'd switched the last two, but it was great all the same. my mom and her boyfriend are just like what you're describing so i might have to argue over which of you has more nonsense. it was really great though. loved it.


Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 11:01:41 PM AEST
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This is a facinating poem, your

desribing how wonderful love is

in an exact oppisite of what other

people think it's not cause of what

they don't understand i loved the effect,

great peice of writting . . .


Dorian Chambers


Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us (User Rating: 1 )
by lifefliesby on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:57:55 AM AEST
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I love you babe.
I'm glade we fit so oddly together.
Must be a stronger bond then, huh? ;)

I love you babe,
"The man in the suit",
Jared J.


Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:15:50 PM AEST
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Valuable indeed. Geez, Anitapoo... I swear, I could wish you nothing greater than to always know the feeling that you must of had when you wrote this....

This honors real love in way that most love poems fail to. It's beautiful, hon.

Having always believed that true beauty is found in that which doesn't fit neatly into collective else's perfect,
~Snemmy~


Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:20:16 AM AEST
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a poem that breathes... beautiful!! hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-


Re: The Most Valuable Nonsense You'll Ever Find Is Us (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 12:52:36 PM AEST
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Well done! Beautiful.... I know what you mean. Love should be wierd...
Take care.
David




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