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Hopeless and crying out for more
These wings don’t fly these wings never soar
Here I am…
Lying in my own sweet bloody pool
Can’t take the way I live I’ve been such a fool
Here I am…
This is real selfish of me I know
I still love you but I’m hurting so I must go
It’s a world away but not too far from here
It’s catching up to me now my suicide is near

Here I am…
I’m really doing it this time
Don’t cry too much goodbye ill be fine
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here I am...just dying

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:55:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Here I am…
Hopeless and crying out for more
These wings don’t fly these wings never soar
Here I am…
Lying in my own sweet bloody pool
Can’t take the way I live I’ve been such a fool
Here I am…
This is real selfish of me I know
I still love you but I’m hurting so I must go
It’s a world away but not too far from here
It’s catching up to me now my suicide is near

Here I am…
I’m really doing it this time
Don’t cry too much goodbye ill be fine




Copyright © pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-04-14 21:55:21]
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Re: here I am...just dying (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 10:01:00 PM AEST
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This is a great poem...I like the way you used repition, and still made it flow..great job and great poem

Clark


Re: here I am...just dying (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 10:08:58 PM AEST
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I am with Clark! GREAT Repitision use! hey look! I cant speel! YEAH! haha. But don't think that suicide is your only way out. I've been down that road. Its not worht it. You will be happy again i promise. Message me if you need to talk. I am here.
Lauren


Re: here I am...just dying (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:34:16 AM AEST
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Well I pray this is just good writing.
the content of this write is heart wrenchingsl sad. awesome writing tho.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy


Re: here I am...just dying (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:26:24 AM AEST
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This is a great poem, very well writen. But such sadness and pain, It just broke my heart . I will say a prayer for you and i hope things get better.
Leia


Re: here I am...just dying (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 02:35:16 AM AEST
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wow, amazing, well done




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