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Array ( [sid] => 90983 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Given Up [time] => 2005-04-14 19:57:11 [hometext] => Oh woe is that which is my bloody love life. [bodytext] =>
Why? Why did I try loving you?
You never wanted me to,
and yet I still tried.
Now I think I finally give up.

It's sad to think I finally am.
So many things I've tried,
and in so many ways I failed.
I can't love you, and can't be your friend.

Yet... I don't think we ever had much of anything.
Sweetheart, you don't know how to treat women.
Even your "friends."
You proved that a few days ago.

Telling me to lose weight?
You really are an arse!
Maybe everyone was right...
I should have stopped talking to you a long time ago. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 280 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Angelic_Demon [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Given Up

Contributed by Angelic_Demon on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:57:11 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Why? Why did I try loving you?
You never wanted me to,
and yet I still tried.
Now I think I finally give up.

It's sad to think I finally am.
So many things I've tried,
and in so many ways I failed.
I can't love you, and can't be your friend.

Yet... I don't think we ever had much of anything.
Sweetheart, you don't know how to treat women.
Even your "friends."
You proved that a few days ago.

Telling me to lose weight?
You really are an arse!
Maybe everyone was right...
I should have stopped talking to you a long time ago.

Copyright © Angelic_Demon ... [ 2005-04-14 19:57:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Given Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:01:16 PM AEST
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Or lack of love life, as it is :p (sorry, couldnt resist) Anyway, I think this is one of my favourites of yours... a topic I cant stand to read... but still, its written perfectly darling, it flows wonderfully and, except the last two lines, I love it :p

Mayhap you should turn your attentions away from men, they're not worth the hastle half the time lol. Like I've always said... you can do better than *HIM* anyway. *mutters* Very nicely done m'dear, write more often!

Love always
Your sis
- Becca

Re: Given Up (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:24:37 PM AEST
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very good write, sounds like this guy was a real arse lol written well hunni, well done.deep and meaningful, you deserve soo much better and I hope you find true love :)
pix xx

Re: Given Up (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:31:30 PM AEST
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wonderful write girl. he was never worth you anyway...forget him, you'll find someone that knows how to treat and respect women and he'll be a thousand, thousand times more beautiful.

x

Re: Given Up (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:28:56 PM AEST
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this is heartfelt and honest, mara, but he is a poopyhead to not see how beautiful you truely are:)
hugs n' love momxx

@->>->:-

p.s. snicker and snort at your note lol

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