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Array ( [sid] => 90975 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love You More [time] => 2005-04-14 19:09:25 [hometext] => If you are in a relationship, and the love of your life tells you that he or she loves you, Isn't it frustrating when you can't prove to them that you love them more? These words might help. Comments are appreciated. [bodytext] => It’s the times I hear you laugh,
That make me sure I love you more.
Times you hold me up,
When I’m about to hit the floor.

The times I see you smile,
Then try to lie and say you don’t.
Times I want to play with you,
Even though you wont.

The times I see you cry,
And use my hands to feel your tears.
The times you are so close to me,
And yet, I want you nearer.

I know I love you more,
Just by how much you’re on my mind.
And also by how close we get…
So tangled…intertwined.

And the times I hear you laugh,
The laugh that makes me giggle too.
Is the same laugh that reminds me,
Of how much more my heart loves you.

See, you think you love me more,
And I feel bad for trying to compete.
But the truth is, Baby, you don’t even know.
I am SO head over feet.

My love for you is crazy.
A kind of love that you can taste.
A love that people envy,
One that I won’t ever waste.

A love that’s greater than all the oceans,
But still has room in store.
And it’s all the things you do,
That make me sure I love you more. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 2 [informant] => JacobsKK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 35 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Love You More

Contributed by JacobsKK on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:09:25 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

It’s the times I hear you laugh,
That make me sure I love you more.
Times you hold me up,
When I’m about to hit the floor.

The times I see you smile,
Then try to lie and say you don’t.
Times I want to play with you,
Even though you wont.

The times I see you cry,
And use my hands to feel your tears.
The times you are so close to me,
And yet, I want you nearer.

I know I love you more,
Just by how much you’re on my mind.
And also by how close we get…
So tangled…intertwined.

And the times I hear you laugh,
The laugh that makes me giggle too.
Is the same laugh that reminds me,
Of how much more my heart loves you.

See, you think you love me more,
And I feel bad for trying to compete.
But the truth is, Baby, you don’t even know.
I am SO head over feet.

My love for you is crazy.
A kind of love that you can taste.
A love that people envy,
One that I won’t ever waste.

A love that’s greater than all the oceans,
But still has room in store.
And it’s all the things you do,
That make me sure I love you more.

Copyright Â© JacobsKK ... [ 2005-04-14 19:09:25]
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Re: Love You More (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 09:16:01 PM AEST
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you have explained the feeling perfectly, amazing and sweetly written. Great job.

Re: Love You More (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 11:38:03 PM AEST
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This is cheerful in it's presentation i feel the

positve vibes a very beautiful peice of

poetry . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Love You More (User Rating: 1 )
by Jzarmel on Wednesday, 3rd November 2010 @ 06:41:55 AM AEST
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nice piece

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