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Array ( [sid] => 90912 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When I Die [time] => 2005-04-14 05:27:41 [hometext] => I dont know were to put this one. [bodytext] => I hope that when i die
My spirit will fly
To this place called heaven
Where all my sins are forgiven

You are the one who created this world
Anyway thats what i heard
You can answer my question for you are wise
Before i live with you in paradise

Why did you create us in your mold
Why did you send us to this world
You are forgiving,i am told
Forgive me if i am too bold

Hear me o great one
Why did you create the sun
The planets and the moon
And days with morning,night and noon

O, god please tell me why
Hope you dont think i am sly
I am just very curious
So please dont get furious

I hope that he answers me
Then i will understand finally
Why we are here,you and me
In this world of mystery [comments] => 2 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 25 [informant] => theeman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

When I Die

Contributed by theeman on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 05:27:41 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I hope that when i die
My spirit will fly
To this place called heaven
Where all my sins are forgiven

You are the one who created this world
Anyway thats what i heard
You can answer my question for you are wise
Before i live with you in paradise

Why did you create us in your mold
Why did you send us to this world
You are forgiving,i am told
Forgive me if i am too bold

Hear me o great one
Why did you create the sun
The planets and the moon
And days with morning,night and noon

O, god please tell me why
Hope you dont think i am sly
I am just very curious
So please dont get furious

I hope that he answers me
Then i will understand finally
Why we are here,you and me
In this world of mystery

Copyright © theeman ... [ 2005-04-14 05:27:41]
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Re: When I Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 06:20:12 AM AEST
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Very nice. Good questions, why put us here to watch us die? Shey

Re: When I Die (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:58:16 AM AEST
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A very well expressed and written piece of poetry. I loved the flow of the verses and the good questions asked. a great poem. Well done
Hugs,
~Sue~

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