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Array ( [sid] => 9091 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Promises [time] => 2002-12-22 22:40:00 [hometext] => This I wrote for my best friend Diana who is at her brother's for the holidays... We have been apart for two months now and I am missing her greatly... Other than that, the poem kind of speaks for itself... [bodytext] => I won't promise you the moon or the heavens,
I won't promise you the sky will be blue,
But I will promise you sure as the sunrise,
That I'll always be there beside you.

I won't promise you that I will be perfect,
And I will never expect that from you,
But I will promise to you so sincerely,
A love that is strong, pure, and true.

I do promise you that I will be faithfull,
I do promise you I never will stray,
By your side giving all my affections,
Till my last breath on my dying day.

I don't hope that we're always together,
I don't hope that our love will stay true,
I dont have to hope these things my baby,
Because God promised that He'd see us through.

Your already my best friend my baby,
Your my lover, the dream of my life,
Take my hand if you would dear Diana,
Become more, would you please be my wife???

p.s.
A little poem I wrote for you,
It was free, no money paid,
I hope it does the magic trick,
I hope it gets me *edited*...

I just love you damn it !!!! [comments] => 7 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 2 [informant] => RodgaDodga [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 39 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Promises

Contributed by RodgaDodga on Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I won't promise you the moon or the heavens,
I won't promise you the sky will be blue,
But I will promise you sure as the sunrise,
That I'll always be there beside you.

I won't promise you that I will be perfect,
And I will never expect that from you,
But I will promise to you so sincerely,
A love that is strong, pure, and true.

I do promise you that I will be faithfull,
I do promise you I never will stray,
By your side giving all my affections,
Till my last breath on my dying day.

I don't hope that we're always together,
I don't hope that our love will stay true,
I dont have to hope these things my baby,
Because God promised that He'd see us through.

Your already my best friend my baby,
Your my lover, the dream of my life,
Take my hand if you would dear Diana,
Become more, would you please be my wife???

p.s.
A little poem I wrote for you,
It was free, no money paid,
I hope it does the magic trick,
I hope it gets me *edited*...

I just love you damn it !!!!




Copyright © RodgaDodga ... [ 2002-12-22 22:40:00]
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Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 11:57:08 PM AEST
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This was sooooo romantic,I loved this write,she will too! Christina


Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 08:17:48 AM AEST
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so beautiful and straight from the heart, i liked most when u said " I just love you damn it !!!!" :) nice way 4 proposal , hope she accepts :)


Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by RodgaDodga on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 09:47:23 AM AEST
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Thank you sooo much for responding to my poem... I was just in the mood and it came out... You are a swetheart and I will look for poems from you... Thank you, Roger
p.s. We are set to be married in Feb '03, and of course you are invited.. :))


Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by RodgaDodga on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 09:51:39 AM AEST
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Thank you sooo much for responding to my poem... Of couse on that last little verse I wasn't hoping to get "edited" .. LOL Look back here soon for there may be a response from her... I will look forward to finding poems here from you... And of course you will be invited to the wedding... :))
Thanks again,
Roger


Re: Promises (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 10:19:48 AM AEST
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Roger,
With everything we have been through. I will always be true to you. Yes I will Marry You. soon I will be in Texas, To start a new life with you. And may every word you said to me be true... And with family and friends the lord will guide us through... Good Luck on this poem baby I love you so much...
Smiles
I Just Love You Damn It!!!

Love Always,
Diana Grace Cesena.(Clark)


Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:43:21 PM AEST
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OMG OMG YES YES YES LOL...AHHHH this poem is so beautiful the way you proposed to her and she said yes omg it has me in tears.....this was so beautiful.....i wish both of you allllllll the happiness in the world.....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.


Re: Promises (User Rating: 1 )
by Haligh on Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 10:09:03 PM AEST
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that is so sweet. awwww. i am jealous...

my ex-boyfriend promised me he'd never leave me . . .

unfortunatly...you can't get much comitment from a 17 year old boy who is led around by things besides his heart. ;-)




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