Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 12:33:22 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 90889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When Did We Become Just Me [time] => 2005-04-13 22:51:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can't belive its over
Although its been 2 long years,
My beloved friend is no longer.
When did it happen?
I'm not quit sure,
When did the conversations dull,
into hey and hello?
What did I do?
What have you become?
I don't reconize you.
When did we,
become just me?
I miss you so much,
and yet you don't care,
your floating in you own mighty air,
i'm invisible to you.
I miss the times when you would call me,
your little buddy, since I was shorter then you.
I miss having to tilt my head,
to tell my secrets,
i miss you,
I miss us.
You were my outlet,
My alternitive to suicide,
you understod everything,
so now I am wondering,
why don't you understand now?
My beloved friend,
what happened?
Was it me?
As I lie in bed,
I think of you,
and only wonder,
are you thinking of me?
And thinking when did we,
become just
Me. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 16 [informant] => AngelOnFire [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

When Did We Become Just Me

Contributed by AngelOnFire on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 10:51:22 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I can't belive its over
Although its been 2 long years,
My beloved friend is no longer.
When did it happen?
I'm not quit sure,
When did the conversations dull,
into hey and hello?
What did I do?
What have you become?
I don't reconize you.
When did we,
become just me?
I miss you so much,
and yet you don't care,
your floating in you own mighty air,
i'm invisible to you.
I miss the times when you would call me,
your little buddy, since I was shorter then you.
I miss having to tilt my head,
to tell my secrets,
i miss you,
I miss us.
You were my outlet,
My alternitive to suicide,
you understod everything,
so now I am wondering,
why don't you understand now?
My beloved friend,
what happened?
Was it me?
As I lie in bed,
I think of you,
and only wonder,
are you thinking of me?
And thinking when did we,
become just
Me.

Copyright © AngelOnFire ... [ 2005-04-13 22:51:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: When Did We Become Just Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 11:01:07 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

very well written. I can really relate, my best friend and have become less then hello...it's sad, but if you try you might be able to regain or stop the way that your friendships headed, though it may not be easy. Again, very nicely written.

Re: When Did We Become Just Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 03:31:40 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

heh. this one was written for me... its happened b4. though i not know the reason. they just part away...

Re: When Did We Become Just Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 09:50:59 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow! Great write sad yet powerful, I think we'e all parted ways with someone so dear to us, just keep your chin up, it'll get better.

Sonya

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com