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Array ( [sid] => 90884 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The change over time [time] => 2005-04-13 21:50:03 [hometext] => i hop ethis changes... [bodytext] => At first It was:

"I HATE YOU"
and I stalked away

Then it was:

"Well I guess your ok"

And now it is:

"I..I...I..."
as I stumble along
things were better when it was calm
Before I saw you in this light
before you made my nights stunning and bright
before I cared about how though or felt
before i began looking below the belt
before when you only noticed me
when there were no other girls
for you to choose over me

Regret:
Well now you've got girlfriends
and go out on dates
you never used to I thought you were late
or maybe you did the thought never dawned
now...well...your gone
I almost had you
if I hadn't been shallow, If I'd been true

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 24 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

The change over time

Contributed by spazz911 on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 09:50:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

At first It was:

"I HATE YOU"
and I stalked away

Then it was:

"Well I guess your ok"

And now it is:

"I..I...I..."
as I stumble along
things were better when it was calm
Before I saw you in this light
before you made my nights stunning and bright
before I cared about how though or felt
before i began looking below the belt
before when you only noticed me
when there were no other girls
for you to choose over me

Regret:
Well now you've got girlfriends
and go out on dates
you never used to I thought you were late
or maybe you did the thought never dawned
now...well...your gone
I almost had you
if I hadn't been shallow, If I'd been true

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-04-13 21:50:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The change over time (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 09:57:50 PM AEST
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oh, casey. it will work out youll see ok? just hold in there for me... i need you to be strong for the both of us.
luv n hugs n lots of hope
jennie*

Re: The change over time (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 10:52:33 PM AEST
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very sad but never give up things seem to come around when least expected and overall good write Ill watch for more
Michelle

Re: The change over time (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 11:57:49 PM AEST
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A very sad write. Hang tuff dear Casey and things will hopefully work out 4 u. Goodluck and I hope ur love finds the tender love it deserves.
Hugs,
~Sue~

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