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Array ( [sid] => 90862 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Oh so that’s Why! [time] => 2005-04-13 17:52:33 [hometext] => And all along I thought I was just bummed out about the world and everything, but no I just hate to work and I hate to do anything but vegg and watch TV [bodytext] => I thought I was devastatingly sad
And I thought I knew the reason
I thought I was utterly depressed
But I could still laugh at anything
I thought it was my loneliness keeping me down
I thought it was my desolation and isolation
That drained me of all my motivation
I thought it was being so unloved
That made me feel so empty
I thought that it was emotional exhaustion
That made we want to do nothing but sleep
I thought it was these constant intense feelings
That opened my eyes to the wrongs of the world
But as it turns out
I’m just a cynic
And it was just an excuse
To be really really lazy

Damn, so what do I do now?
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Oh so that’s Why!

Contributed by Onslaught on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 05:52:33 PM in AEST
Topic: HumorPoetry

I thought I was devastatingly sad
And I thought I knew the reason
I thought I was utterly depressed
But I could still laugh at anything
I thought it was my loneliness keeping me down
I thought it was my desolation and isolation
That drained me of all my motivation
I thought it was being so unloved
That made me feel so empty
I thought that it was emotional exhaustion
That made we want to do nothing but sleep
I thought it was these constant intense feelings
That opened my eyes to the wrongs of the world
But as it turns out
I’m just a cynic
And it was just an excuse
To be really really lazy

Damn, so what do I do now?

Copyright Â© Onslaught ... [ 2005-04-13 17:52:33]
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Re: Oh so that’s Why! (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:52:32 PM AEST
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grinning over here....ah, I would love the chance to be lazy! Cute write...gave me a chuckle.

Carol

Re: Oh so that’s Why! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 09:08:08 PM AEST
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lol! Too cool.

Re: Oh so that’s Why! (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 03:30:55 AM AEST
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Hey,I hope this has nothing to do with what I said to you. Because if so I never said anything about being lazy. It is a good poem though. I just hope you don't think I was insinuating that the reason for certain things is simply because you are lazy... I don't know. PM me! Good job though.

Re: Oh so that’s Why! (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 07:06:14 AM AEST
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LMAO Mikey, you're not lazy you're just a normal 23 year old skater, electro loving boi, who has one big adorable heart.

Love the poem silly.

Janey

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