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Array ( [sid] => 90840 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lonely Girl [time] => 2005-04-13 16:29:59 [hometext] => I wrote this today just before i was chased by a gang calling me a 'weird loner goth with notebook' hey i gotta get these poems from somewhere...even if it is my fear... [bodytext] => I cry as I write
This cold and and lonely night
You know I'd stay a while
But I must cut away my smile

Some say I fear
To others I'm 'not all here'
But to me I'm as close
As the shadow of your ghost

Some say I ought to be in the looney bin
Riddled with guilt and sin
But really I'm just the lonely girl
Wandering this lonely world...
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Lonely Girl

Contributed by Dying_Angel on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 04:29:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I cry as I write
This cold and and lonely night
You know I'd stay a while
But I must cut away my smile

Some say I fear
To others I'm 'not all here'
But to me I'm as close
As the shadow of your ghost

Some say I ought to be in the looney bin
Riddled with guilt and sin
But really I'm just the lonely girl
Wandering this lonely world...

Copyright © Dying_Angel ... [ 2005-04-13 16:29:59]
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Re: Lonely Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 02:04:24 PM AEST
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Great write. SOme of the lines were really beautiful. I hate how people are so horrible. People still torment me sometimes and call me "goth freak" sometimes. Just show them your stuff and let them be intimidated. I'm sure they're only scared at your wisdom. Well, i hope things improve! Keep writing.

~*Naomi of Night*~

Re: Lonely Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Maruna on Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 05:21:07 PM AEST
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You really conveyed the feelings of being picked on well, and I hope those immature people leave you alone. I would like to help you with the rhythm of your lines a little though, so comment me back if that sounds good! :)

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