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Array ( [sid] => 90833 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => An Elven Prince Walked By The Sea [time] => 2005-04-13 15:51:24 [hometext] => A poem that came from my book-in-progress, 'Thrandon' [bodytext] => An elven prince walked by the sea, the sea
The ocean waved and cried, “Be wary of me, of me”
The elven prince replied, “But you are so fair, so fair
From your blue cloak to your white hair, white hair”

To this the sea did say, did say
“Do not walk this way, this way”
The prince cried in despair, despair
“For you, my love, I care, I care”

The ocean in a fit of fury, fury
Began to recede in a hurry, hurry
The elven prince called, “Don’t go, don’t go”
But the sea had no more to show, to show [comments] => 3 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 40 [informant] => Cupid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

An Elven Prince Walked By The Sea

Contributed by Cupid on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 03:51:24 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

An elven prince walked by the sea, the sea
The ocean waved and cried, “Be wary of me, of me”
The elven prince replied, “But you are so fair, so fair
From your blue cloak to your white hair, white hair”

To this the sea did say, did say
“Do not walk this way, this way”
The prince cried in despair, despair
“For you, my love, I care, I care”

The ocean in a fit of fury, fury
Began to recede in a hurry, hurry
The elven prince called, “Don’t go, don’t go”
But the sea had no more to show, to show

Copyright Â© Cupid ... [ 2005-04-13 15:51:24]
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Re: An Elven Prince Walked By The Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by chazthepoet on Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 06:33:14 PM AEST
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well written

Re: An Elven Prince Walked By The Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 03:08:27 PM AEST
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nice little story poem. i liked ur imagination put in to this one. very good my friend. but y the repeat of the last words?

Re: An Elven Prince Walked By The Sea (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 04:04:07 AM AEST
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On some loines i understand the repeat because it adds rhythym to the poem then you shorten your rhthym and continue to repeat the last words and throws the reader off. Nonetheless this is a good write.

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