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[bodytext] => There he stood, they were all in shock There he stood, at the very top He climbed this holy mountain For a brief conversation with God Thrown in a river, and crowned King This holy man, was only a human being Being this, the day of all days A God for a Golden Café they mistook Treasonous and deceptively built God was merciful, he eventually compromised As he sat there and pondered the earth’s ultimate demise A second chance was hence granted And so he now stood, glowing faceless The two stones weighed heavily on his soul’s core For the Pharaohs had rendered him fragile and brutally sore His decent was imminent, his route un-chosen He stood there and stared, majestically frozen His chosen people bowed and awaited him His love for them shrouded and abated, limb by limb Once sea level, in this lonely dessert He speaks, to everyone’s delighted pleasure He makes no mention of the face of God His young free nation, rips into applause There he stood, gently in his hands The lock and key to the Promised Land Flowing with milk and honey in misery There he stands, holding history [comments] => 1 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jyssvw22 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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