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Array ( [sid] => 90802 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2005-04-13 08:32:26 [hometext] => First poem online....I feel like I've turned away from all thats true in my life.... [bodytext] => Apart away it feels like every day
I’m lost in lust and lost in my mind
Lost in all these games of my mind
But this games not mine I’m just a pawn
Another piece in a game gone wrong
God speaks and they all move
In fear of Him and what He’ll do
But instead I turn and walk away
I continue to live my life the same
I’m not a pawn and I will not play
I’m going to live my life my way
So the Devil smiles and lets me in
He tell me that I can live in sin
I think that I’ve been freed of the game
But the truth is that nothings changed
I’ve only switched my side I’m deep in the game
But now I’m happy lost in my sin
But what will happen when I reach the end
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sride686 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Lost

Contributed by sride686 on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:32:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Apart away it feels like every day
I’m lost in lust and lost in my mind
Lost in all these games of my mind
But this games not mine I’m just a pawn
Another piece in a game gone wrong
God speaks and they all move
In fear of Him and what He’ll do
But instead I turn and walk away
I continue to live my life the same
I’m not a pawn and I will not play
I’m going to live my life my way
So the Devil smiles and lets me in
He tell me that I can live in sin
I think that I’ve been freed of the game
But the truth is that nothings changed
I’ve only switched my side I’m deep in the game
But now I’m happy lost in my sin
But what will happen when I reach the end

Copyright Â© sride686 ... [ 2005-04-13 08:32:26]
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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by lost13 on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 08:35:34 AM AEST
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hey this was really good. something to think about. like this is what we go through every day.
welcome to YPDC
~*lost*~

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by kidcharlemagne on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 09:43:35 AM AEST
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You seem to be mixed up at the moment, Insinuates you've moved across to the Dark side. Is this religious, or do you just feel you're lacking direction?

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:08:59 AM AEST
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I liked your poem. I think at different phases of our lives we all struggle within. I hope you find your peace. Thanks for sharing and glad to have you on the sight!

Carol

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:44:12 PM AEST
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Steve it feels as if though you're seeking the right path, but you've actually been lead to the wrong one. I sense pain anguish and despair in between the lines. Seek his guidance my dear friend and he shall shed a light for u.
Hugs,
~sue~

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