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Array ( [sid] => 90766 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A field of dreams... [time] => 2005-04-12 21:43:17 [hometext] => Let your heart float to the land of dreams... [bodytext] => Far beyond the valley
Down where the river flows
Nestled about the evergreens
As the sunlight radiantly glows

Cast your longing dreams
Along the rugged terrain
Where loving dreams dwell
Amidst the autumn's rain

Release all the troubled thoughts
That ember in your heart
Regain peace and serenity
An everlasting love will start

Settled amongst the shaded evergreens
Swaying in the mid afternoon
Is the field of desired dreams
Floating amidst the blue lagoon [comments] => 8 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 14 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

A field of dreams...

Contributed by mina-1 on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 09:43:17 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

Far beyond the valley
Down where the river flows
Nestled about the evergreens
As the sunlight radiantly glows

Cast your longing dreams
Along the rugged terrain
Where loving dreams dwell
Amidst the autumn's rain

Release all the troubled thoughts
That ember in your heart
Regain peace and serenity
An everlasting love will start

Settled amongst the shaded evergreens
Swaying in the mid afternoon
Is the field of desired dreams
Floating amidst the blue lagoon

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-04-12 21:43:17]
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Re: A field of dreams... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:33:26 PM AEST
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Beautifull, my friend. Being a country gal I luv nature. I live in the house I was raised in, in the country but gonna move into a trailer before too long for more room. I gave the house to my neice. Course my country here is getting too populated for me.
A masterpeice of dreams.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: A field of dreams... (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:55:40 PM AEST
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SO SWEET LIKE THAT OF A FANTASY! YOU WRITE FOR ALL TO SEE LIKE A WELL NEEDED CHARITY!! IT READS AS WELL AS FEELS & FLOWS SO SMOOTH!!! WITH A PASSION THAT PLEADS UPON EVERY ROMANTIC MOVE!!! VERY WELL DONE SUE!!!!

Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!

Re: A field of dreams... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:54:38 PM AEST
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Sue,
What a uplifting sweet and well written poem!! I really enjoyed reading it.

Hugs
Leia

Re: A field of dreams... (User Rating: 1 )
by reflections on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 07:15:54 AM AEST
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Well composed descriptive poem directing the reader to a place of solace where the heart and soul is free to enjoy the happiness of every dream ever conceived. A place of reward for the dreamer who seeks paradise. Good job . . . wonderful idea.

Cheers
John

Re: A field of dreams... (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 09:54:50 AM AEST
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this is excellent, I love the imagery

Re: A field of dreams... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:09:08 PM AEST
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U write poetry as an artist paints or a

musicain composes a love song, in

a word, " BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL"

Dorian Chambers

Re: A field of dreams... (User Rating: 1 )
by dvsnme816 on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 08:00:31 AM AEST
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nice vision of a heaven on earth feeling....you really got a talent for this. i support your arte in every possible way i can, starting with a thumbs-up for the poetry. you can write about any emotion you want to in an instant, nice conversions of mind-set. i will read your poetry for as long as i can see...keep it up.

Alex

Re: A field of dreams... (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 02:05:31 AM AEST
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This is my ever long wish to reach such a field of dreams..hugs for the love of nature. keep writing on such refreshing poems:-) venkat

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