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Array ( [sid] => 90713 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => nothing continued [time] => 2005-04-12 10:24:06 [hometext] => by no one who matters [bodytext] => No one that sees
that life is so hard
No one who knows when
I'm one step from retard

No one who listens
to what I must say
No one who knows
that I die day by day

No one to know, so
my heart is not stone
No one to care for
so I'm not alone

No one who can feel
life tearin' me 'part
No one can thaw
this victim's froz'n heart

No one sees thru
this PC tech's skill
No one suspects
that I'd die for a thrill

No one who listens
when my bottle is full
Open my mouth and
I turn invis'ble

No one who knows
what it's like to be numb
Open my mouth and
they say that I'm dumb

No one who feels that
my loss would mean much
Leaving so empty
never feeling her touch

Staring through windows
wishin' we weren't 'part
Life of desolation
is strangling my heart

Struggling to find
a way to be better
but all my efforts
leave me deader and deader

So ends this poem
which no one will read
same goes for the poet
whom no one will need [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Jaycee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

nothing continued

Contributed by Jaycee on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:24:06 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

No one that sees
that life is so hard
No one who knows when
I'm one step from retard

No one who listens
to what I must say
No one who knows
that I die day by day

No one to know, so
my heart is not stone
No one to care for
so I'm not alone

No one who can feel
life tearin' me 'part
No one can thaw
this victim's froz'n heart

No one sees thru
this PC tech's skill
No one suspects
that I'd die for a thrill

No one who listens
when my bottle is full
Open my mouth and
I turn invis'ble

No one who knows
what it's like to be numb
Open my mouth and
they say that I'm dumb

No one who feels that
my loss would mean much
Leaving so empty
never feeling her touch

Staring through windows
wishin' we weren't 'part
Life of desolation
is strangling my heart

Struggling to find
a way to be better
but all my efforts
leave me deader and deader

So ends this poem
which no one will read
same goes for the poet
whom no one will need

Copyright © Jaycee ... [ 2005-04-12 10:24:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: nothing continued (User Rating: 1 )
by garyforawhile on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:33:40 AM AEST
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great poem. many thoughts and emotions in full transmission here, i like that. keep that creative arsenal going!

Re: nothing continued (User Rating: 1 )
by StoneAngel on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 10:53:38 AM AEST
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Thats soo sad, cheer up. I read it and your other one. I know that your having a difficult time but please don't kill yourself. Ive felt the way you do. It's only a phase, you'll get through it.

Re: nothing continued (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:27:52 AM AEST
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i read yer poem! and im sure people need you, im sure ppl care for you. im really not one to give great advice as i myself am in a rather tight spot, but u shouldnt have to feel so alone. ppl here love u, i would hate to have such a great poet as yourself leave for good. keep holding on... oh yea, n great poem i loved it
chin up.... luv n hugs
jennie*

Re: nothing continued (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 07:22:51 PM AEST
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Lots of emotions in this....all negative ones... I hope this still does not apply....
Jenni

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