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cause my bestfriend feels so sad
i wish i could help her
its taring me apart to see her like that
i've known her since forever
and to see her cut herself
to see her cry her self to sleep
to stop eating
I hate it
Im there for her
if she ever needs anything at all
to make sure she gets up if she does fall
shes my bestfriend...shes not just her...
shes important i cant tell anyone hardly anything shes always there for me when i need it
she always stick by me and stick with me when i need help
i could name things right away if u wanted me too!
shes my bestfriend
I will stick with her til the end
if she ever needs anything at all
I will make sure she gets up if she does fall
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If She Does Fall

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 02:55:25 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

i feel so bad
cause my bestfriend feels so sad
i wish i could help her
its taring me apart to see her like that
i've known her since forever
and to see her cut herself
to see her cry her self to sleep
to stop eating
I hate it
Im there for her
if she ever needs anything at all
to make sure she gets up if she does fall
shes my bestfriend...shes not just her...
shes important i cant tell anyone hardly anything shes always there for me when i need it
she always stick by me and stick with me when i need help
i could name things right away if u wanted me too!
shes my bestfriend
I will stick with her til the end
if she ever needs anything at all
I will make sure she gets up if she does fall

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-04-12 02:55:25]
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Re: If She Does Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:52:03 AM AEST
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this is a really touching poem. she's lucky to have such a good friend in urself supporting her. i know how helpless u feel when one of ur friends is hurting on the inside and physically hurting herself as well and i also know how my friends did when i did the same thing. it definately helps to have such a good friend there for support. she's a very lucky girl. keep up ur excellent poems.
unforgiven

Re: If She Does Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 02:20:32 PM AEST
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I agree, sounds like she has what a lot of people crave, a magnificent friend. But it sounds like she already has fallen. Has she, or you, told anyone else about what's happening? Just stay by her side and be there. I wish there were more people like you.

~*Naomi of Night*~

Re: If She Does Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:43:27 AM AEST
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Good Right And Kate Is So Lucky To Have A Friend Like You!

*Hugs And Kisses*

Kimmy

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