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Array ( [sid] => 90698 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't touch my STUFF [time] => 2005-04-12 01:38:32 [hometext] => this is not a poem , it's just some thoughts that I liked to write this way [bodytext] => Even though it's CROWDED
LONLY we feel
cause this is what we wanted
and now is that we're real
this is how we were created
One spirit in Each body
neither two spirits
nor two bodies
and if you don't accept it
just close your eyes
or you can swallow a bomb
and blow it in your stomach
nothing is gonna change
Everyone has got
his own life
if you care about others'
you get lost
just leave me alone
cause this is how I am
don't read my papers
don't use my pens
don't invade my room
you won't reach my heart
It's hidden inside
we think of who forget us
and forget who remember
this is how we are
Love is STUPIDITY
cause is blocks your mind
don't ever believe it
Back to my LONLINESS
cause it misses me
how poor it is
Don't hold your breath
everything is FAKE
everything is GONE
try to think deeper
but you'll never get it
just get out NOW
don't talk to me
don't touch MY STUFF
CAUSE I'M NOT YOURS [comments] => 5 [counter] => 621 [topic] => 6 [informant] => kaosar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Don't touch my STUFF

Contributed by kaosar on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:38:32 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Even though it's CROWDED
LONLY we feel
cause this is what we wanted
and now is that we're real
this is how we were created
One spirit in Each body
neither two spirits
nor two bodies
and if you don't accept it
just close your eyes
or you can swallow a bomb
and blow it in your stomach
nothing is gonna change
Everyone has got
his own life
if you care about others'
you get lost
just leave me alone
cause this is how I am
don't read my papers
don't use my pens
don't invade my room
you won't reach my heart
It's hidden inside
we think of who forget us
and forget who remember
this is how we are
Love is STUPIDITY
cause is blocks your mind
don't ever believe it
Back to my LONLINESS
cause it misses me
how poor it is
Don't hold your breath
everything is FAKE
everything is GONE
try to think deeper
but you'll never get it
just get out NOW
don't talk to me
don't touch MY STUFF
CAUSE I'M NOT YOURS

Copyright © kaosar ... [ 2005-04-12 01:38:32]
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Re: Don't touch my STUFF (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:43:07 AM AEST
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you dont call this a poem? well whatever you call it. its very well written and a good read

~vermillion~

Re: Don't touch my STUFF (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:14:24 PM AEST
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That's telling them Kaosar, there comes a time when each of us must take a stand! You don't appear to me, through your writings like you are this man. You reached out to me with love, and if you are so against it, then you wouldn't that!
You don't have rhyme to have a poem Koasar, and your thoughts are just great here. "Fire in the belly" we should all have from time, time.
Keep up the fine work.
Warm Love
ConSue
And a Hearty Welcome Again!!
P.S. What does your name mean?

Re: Don't touch my STUFF (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 07:13:43 PM AEST
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Hi Koasar!
I would prefer ;to call you Kaspar if you don't mind. You write very well.
I do not believe thing that you are that bottled up, rather the contrary but fight desperately against opening up. Against the goad - are you perhaps familiar with the Christian scripture - Acts, where St. Paul fights like mad against the goad only hurts himself.

Your writing is profound . Let it all out! Good work but be prepared for wholesome surprises.

PAX,! Pace!, Paz, Myr, Paix Friede Peace, Shalom!
So you see you got company. I am multilingual, - true polyglot. tough right?
Elizabeth

Re: Don't touch my STUFF (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:00:37 AM AEST
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"Back to my LONLINESS
cause it misses me
how poor it is"
i can not say enough how much i love your lines here, sooo beautiful, your poem is wonderful, excellent expression of feelings:)
hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

p.s. i am going to try again to translate your one poem in your language, im having no luck finding it yet:O

Re: Don't touch my STUFF (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:16:33 AM AEST
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Welcome dear Kaosar to YPDC.
I call this a poem a very well expressed and vented one. You show 'em friend. It's good to make a stand for oneself. An outstanding and heart poured poem written so well.
hugs,
~sue~

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