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Array ( [sid] => 90691 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Sun Rises in Equador [time] => 2005-04-12 00:46:23 [hometext] => Don't normally write so fast and post so unfinished... and the title just means the sun is everywhere [bodytext] => I need a man to hold me tight,
one of passion, one who’s bright.
One who knows at three a.m.
I’ll just be coming to bed again.

A man who I can’t do better than,
a complimenting half to the gal I am.
One who hits more than misses
who holds my hair and lingers kisses.

I ache for the growing
for the happy, healthy knowing,
for the family and the lifestyle,
where we work and relax a while.

A man who accepts me
for the beast we all can be
who knows when I go hiding
that it’s better of abiding.

I want for the life of my dreams
to not give up for I think it seems
it can be done, this life be won,
for each day still starts with sun.

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 14 [informant] => girltranscended [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

The Sun Rises in Equador

Contributed by girltranscended on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:46:23 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I need a man to hold me tight,
one of passion, one who’s bright.
One who knows at three a.m.
I’ll just be coming to bed again.

A man who I can’t do better than,
a complimenting half to the gal I am.
One who hits more than misses
who holds my hair and lingers kisses.

I ache for the growing
for the happy, healthy knowing,
for the family and the lifestyle,
where we work and relax a while.

A man who accepts me
for the beast we all can be
who knows when I go hiding
that it’s better of abiding.

I want for the life of my dreams
to not give up for I think it seems
it can be done, this life be won,
for each day still starts with sun.

Copyright Â© girltranscended ... [ 2005-04-12 00:46:23]
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Re: The Sun Rises in Equador (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:53:36 AM AEST
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It looks finished to me.
This is wonderful, girltranscended.
Just wonderful!

Re: The Sun Rises in Equador (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:00:05 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. Looks great to me :)

Re: The Sun Rises in Equador (User Rating: 1 )
by electrique_poet on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:30:07 AM AEST
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this was very nice and did seem complete, id like to see what you add/subtract/rework to create the finished product, im sure it will shine either way

... in words electrique

Re: The Sun Rises in Equador (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 03:15:31 AM AEST
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well im glad you posted on my poems...cuz now i get to read all these great poems....the title entrigued me and I again loved what I read....great job and I'll keep reading

Re: The Sun Rises in Equador (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 04:27:33 PM AEST
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First, I love your screenname. It definitely touches on a "core feeling", as I would call it. Second, I love the title of the poem. Something about it seemed to encompass so much, but I can't really explain it. And Third, I thought this poem was honest.

I want for the life of my dreams
to not give up for I think it seems
it can be done, this life be won,
for each day still starts with sun.

This felt hopeful, and I felt it contrasted well with the rest of your poem, which expressed your longings and desires.

Be True,
zenmind

Re: The Sun Rises in Equador (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:50:11 AM AEST
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At least your dream seems within reason and not someone or something unattainable.
Honest, flowed well and did not seem rushed or unfinished.
I also think the last stanza does tie in..in the sense that it is not just hope, but patience.

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