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Array ( [sid] => 90678 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let It Die [time] => 2005-04-11 23:05:45 [hometext] => If you love something set it free, it if comes bac it was meant to be... [bodytext] => You left me,
But you've yet to go.
Hearing your voice,
Makes healing slow.

You torment me,
With pity acts of sorrow.
Thanks again for what you've done,
I know I'll miss you tomorrow.

I hate wanting you,
And I hate to feel this way.
Until you called my skies were blue,
But now they frown with grey.

Just like a candle,
Let it burn.
You dont know my pain,
Would you like a turn?

To me your my lover,
But to you I'm just a friend.
If you wont let it die,
Then why'd you make it end?

Just let it go,
Let it die.
For once in my life,
I'd like not to cry.

In my life,
You bring me pain.
In my cloudless sky,
You seem to bring me rain.

Just go,
Please let me be.
Unravel these chains,
And let me be free.
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Let It Die

Contributed by Pats4eva7 on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:05:45 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You left me,
But you've yet to go.
Hearing your voice,
Makes healing slow.

You torment me,
With pity acts of sorrow.
Thanks again for what you've done,
I know I'll miss you tomorrow.

I hate wanting you,
And I hate to feel this way.
Until you called my skies were blue,
But now they frown with grey.

Just like a candle,
Let it burn.
You dont know my pain,
Would you like a turn?

To me your my lover,
But to you I'm just a friend.
If you wont let it die,
Then why'd you make it end?

Just let it go,
Let it die.
For once in my life,
I'd like not to cry.

In my life,
You bring me pain.
In my cloudless sky,
You seem to bring me rain.

Just go,
Please let me be.
Unravel these chains,
And let me be free.

Copyright © Pats4eva7 ... [ 2005-04-11 23:05:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Let It Die (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:12:19 PM AEST
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So sad but well written.
huggs,
emy

Re: Let It Die (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:41:07 PM AEST
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omg! i love this poem i had a lump in my throat all the way thro i can imagine how much pain ur in i had a boyfriend that left me cause hes ex gf took him back and well i loved him cause he was my first boyfriend and i think i still love him and that poem reminded me so much of him i really love this poem great write!!

Re: Let It Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 12:24:31 AM AEST
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a very heart felt poem, i really liked this one. please keep writing!

~vermillion~

Re: Let It Die (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 08:20:58 AM AEST
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Emotivvely done, sadness is everywhere we look and only time can heal it.

Lovely write.

Jane

Re: Let It Die (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 06:11:50 PM AEST
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oh Bravo!!
very well written and soooo emotional.
very nicely done and I know the feeling quite well.
Great Job!

~Brenna~

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