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Array ( [sid] => 90653 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Soul Saved [time] => 2005-04-11 18:55:37 [hometext] => I remember writing this one. So much emotion went into it, that there are teardrops on the original copy. [bodytext] => She wanted to die,
She was sick of crying.
She was tired of rotting away,
And of lying.

Saying she was just fine,
But only that and nothing else.
Because she knew that her words,
Would never really help.

She hated who she was,
She hated everything she did.
She couldn’t even talk to you,
Her parents forbid.

But just before the puzzle,
Was completely torn apart.
The very last piece of it,
Connected to his heart.

He began to walk backwards,
A little more each day.
And her mom let her call him,
There were now words she could say.

With every step he grew closer,
To the girl who hid away.
He pulled her out of the corner,
Dried her tears, and loves her today.

Now they stand together,
Hand-in-hand in all they do.
Passion can only strengthen,
With every kiss, and “I Love You.”

Their love is one that’s envied.
A vast ocean, that beautifully waves.
She once was a nothing in the dark,
But is now a soul that was saved.

She is me…And I love you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 31 [informant] => JacobsKK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 39 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

A Soul Saved

Contributed by JacobsKK on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 06:55:37 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

She wanted to die,
She was sick of crying.
She was tired of rotting away,
And of lying.

Saying she was just fine,
But only that and nothing else.
Because she knew that her words,
Would never really help.

She hated who she was,
She hated everything she did.
She couldn’t even talk to you,
Her parents forbid.

But just before the puzzle,
Was completely torn apart.
The very last piece of it,
Connected to his heart.

He began to walk backwards,
A little more each day.
And her mom let her call him,
There were now words she could say.

With every step he grew closer,
To the girl who hid away.
He pulled her out of the corner,
Dried her tears, and loves her today.

Now they stand together,
Hand-in-hand in all they do.
Passion can only strengthen,
With every kiss, and “I Love You.”

Their love is one that’s envied.
A vast ocean, that beautifully waves.
She once was a nothing in the dark,
But is now a soul that was saved.

She is me…And I love you.

Copyright Â© JacobsKK ... [ 2005-04-11 18:55:37]
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Re: A Soul Saved (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 04:24:56 AM AEST
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Another beautifull write with a great ending.
full with emotions and feelings that just reaches out and grabs the reader.
huggs,
emy

Re: A Soul Saved (User Rating: 1 )
by doug on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:26:34 PM AEST
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This poem is quite lovely I think and I do envy this love . keep up the good writing ,
truly , doug

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