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the lonely butterfly

where false beauty
is her only way to live

and all hope dies
she has nothing to give

a delicate sight
made nothing right

alone now dieing in a jar
where her dreams never get far

an analogy

the epitome

.....

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Butterflys and shattered dreams

Contributed by bttrflynajar on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 06:45:06 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

floating on in a summer sky
the lonely butterfly

where false beauty
is her only way to live

and all hope dies
she has nothing to give

a delicate sight
made nothing right

alone now dieing in a jar
where her dreams never get far

an analogy

the epitome

.....

Copyright © bttrflynajar ... [ 2005-04-11 18:45:06]
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Re: Butterflys and shattered dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jyssvw on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 06:48:21 PM AEST
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very cool write, i liked it alot, i liked getting my own meaning out of it.

good stuff

Re: Butterflys and shattered dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:37:59 PM AEST
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excellent title first of all, and very good piece. im glad i read this one. i especially liked the first stanza.

Re: Butterflys and shattered dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by electrique_poet on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 08:10:32 PM AEST
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this was amazing, i really enjoyed reading it, i love the vagueness of each stanza and each line, i was able to picture more precisely a meaning all my own, a great write

... in words electrique

Re: Butterflys and shattered dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 01:11:42 PM AEST
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Very discriptive, and beautiful.. Loved it. Thanks. Shey

Re: Butterflys and shattered dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 11:37:44 PM AEST
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excellent

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