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Array ( [sid] => 90557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With out You! [time] => 2005-04-10 21:41:59 [hometext] => This is more a letter to my fience then it is a poem. But I thought I would share it with everyone. Hope you all like it. I love you Kim! [bodytext] => --------------________________-----------------------

My Dearest Kim:

Just as a poet needs inspiration to write a masterpiece

I need you ...

Just as an artist needs a subject for his work of art,

I need you ...

Just as a teacher needs a pupil to mold into greatness,

I need you ...

Just as a composer needs a theme to create a timeless melody,

I need you ...

For without you, Kim, my life would be empty of all inspiration.
There will be no work of art for me to gaze at;
no person of greatness before me;
no timeless melody to listen to.
My life will exist in shades of gray instead of vibrant colors, and I will be less than whole.

In the past, the proper words have escaped me,
and my innermost feelings have been kept locked away in the depths of my heart.
No more - for through this letter,
I proclaim to you, Kim,
my undying love and eternal devotion.

Yours forever,

James [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 38 [informant] => MajesticPoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )
With out You!

Contributed by MajesticPoet on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:41:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes



--------------________________-----------------------

My Dearest Kim:

Just as a poet needs inspiration to write a masterpiece

I need you ...

Just as an artist needs a subject for his work of art,

I need you ...

Just as a teacher needs a pupil to mold into greatness,

I need you ...

Just as a composer needs a theme to create a timeless melody,

I need you ...

For without you, Kim, my life would be empty of all inspiration.
There will be no work of art for me to gaze at;
no person of greatness before me;
no timeless melody to listen to.
My life will exist in shades of gray instead of vibrant colors, and I will be less than whole.

In the past, the proper words have escaped me,
and my innermost feelings have been kept locked away in the depths of my heart.
No more - for through this letter,
I proclaim to you, Kim,
my undying love and eternal devotion.

Yours forever,

James




Copyright © MajesticPoet ... [ 2005-04-10 21:41:59]
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Re: With out You! (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:04:45 PM AEST
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I WISH I COULD WRITE SOMETHING THIS GOOD. IT IS ASTONISHINGLY BEAUTIFUL. IT IS THE MOST WONDERFUL LETTER I THINK ANYONE COULD EVER WRITE TO THEIR DEAREST LOVE.

GOOD LUCK & BEST WISHES TO YOU AND YOUR FIENCE

STEW


Re: With out You! (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:59:51 PM AEST
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A masterpeice of beauty.
Kim is lucky to have u.
huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: With out You! (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenAngel on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 07:03:46 PM AEST
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Aww this is so sweet. Man, I wish someone would write something like this for me. lol I hope Kim appreciates this. Great job hun!
-Kimberlee




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