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Array ( [sid] => 9055 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => If I Could Have A Second Chance [time] => 2002-12-22 06:00:00 [hometext] => "i guss this is were this pome belongs. dont have anything much to say about this pome. i enjoyed it and i hope you do." [bodytext] => I couldn't tell you
what my heart ached to say,
how much I love you ,
how much I want you,
and now your gone,
crying all day,
cursing under my breath,
why couldn't I ,
tell you the day we met,
now I'm here all alone
and lost without you,
how my life feels like it's not there
is something I can't explain,
If I could have a second chance,
I would tell you from the start,
what my heart ached to say [comments] => 3 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 22 [informant] => tollo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

If I Could Have A Second Chance

Contributed by tollo on Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I couldn't tell you
what my heart ached to say,
how much I love you ,
how much I want you,
and now your gone,
crying all day,
cursing under my breath,
why couldn't I ,
tell you the day we met,
now I'm here all alone
and lost without you,
how my life feels like it's not there
is something I can't explain,
If I could have a second chance,
I would tell you from the start,
what my heart ached to say

Copyright © tollo ... [ 2002-12-22 06:00:00]
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Re: If I Could Have A Second Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 06:15:33 PM AEST
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AAWW THIS WAS REAL TOUCHING

Re: If I Could Have A Second Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 02:58:46 PM AEST
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and now your gone, crying all day, cursing under my breath.....ahhh i love those lines.....and oh how this one touched m y heart so deeply tollo ....thanks for sharing this one i hope if this is written to anyone specific that they give the second chance, i know i would after reading somthing like this.....it's beautiful.....thanks for sharing it....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: If I Could Have A Second Chance (User Rating: 1 )
by emmafarah on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 02:47:26 AM AEST
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love it...esecially the cursing part....

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