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In My Heart It's Snowing
It's Cold, It's Freezing
My Soul Is Wheezing
I'm Slowly Dying
I'm No Longer Trying
The Wind Is Slight
The Light Is Bright
I'm Reaching For The Warm
My Thoughts Being To Swarm
I Am Able To Escape The Pit
My Inner Light Is Now Relit
But You Are No Longer Here
And You Are No Longer Near
But It's Better Off This Way
Don't Get Me Wrong, I Want You To Stay
But Feel Free To Be Honest, I Want The Truth
No Matter What It Is, No Matter How Uncouth
I Need To Hear It
Although I Fear It
It Will Set Me Free
And Allow Me To Grasp My Identity

Douglas K. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Dkanis [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Freedom

Contributed by Dkanis on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:24:53 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

The Wind Is Blowing
In My Heart It's Snowing
It's Cold, It's Freezing
My Soul Is Wheezing
I'm Slowly Dying
I'm No Longer Trying
The Wind Is Slight
The Light Is Bright
I'm Reaching For The Warm
My Thoughts Being To Swarm
I Am Able To Escape The Pit
My Inner Light Is Now Relit
But You Are No Longer Here
And You Are No Longer Near
But It's Better Off This Way
Don't Get Me Wrong, I Want You To Stay
But Feel Free To Be Honest, I Want The Truth
No Matter What It Is, No Matter How Uncouth
I Need To Hear It
Although I Fear It
It Will Set Me Free
And Allow Me To Grasp My Identity

Douglas K.

Copyright © Dkanis ... [ 2005-04-10 20:24:53]
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Re: Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:31:35 PM AEST
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Good poem, good rhymes. But why do people think death will set them free?

Re: Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 12:17:41 AM AEST
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Wow, thats truly powerful. Great imagry, you can really see all that. Really wonderful

Re: Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 01:28:29 AM AEST
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Douglas, it is a fine poem. It's always better to know for sure, than to let the doubt raise ghosts within us. Well done.

Loende

Re: Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by Mikayla on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 08:49:17 PM AEST
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That poem really spoke to me and you did a wonderful job. Keep up the good work! I'm proud of you even though I dont know you! GREAT JOB!

Re: Freedom (User Rating: 1 )
by vikki on Friday, 19th August 2011 @ 12:01:02 AM AEST
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hello
well written but laced with pessmisstic attitude :) isnt it?

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