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Array ( [sid] => 90527 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eternal Kiss [time] => 2005-04-10 16:53:02 [hometext] => Blood Flower's hymn of Death... Sing along... [bodytext] => Bleed for me,
Sweet crimson lamentations,
Scarlet screams of the monsters within…
Release them,
Control doesn’t matter anymore,
Succumb to me…

Icy caresses,
Kiss eternal,
Beautiful death…

Sacrifice yourself to my Immortal touch,
Proclaim your love, bittersweet whispers in my ear…
Let me teach you the art of pleasurable pain,
Claws dragging down your back,
Fangs seeping into your skin,

You are mine…

Reveal every hidden desire,
Fall helpless under my spell..
Come, mere mortal,
And give me your life…
Scream my name,
Ah, such a pain-filled harmony…
Bear my mark,
Etched mercilessly into your chest,

BLOOD FLOWER…

Awaken, my child,
The night awaits us,
Embrace the darkness,
It is who you are now… forevermore…

VAMPIRE... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 13 [informant] => FleurdeSang [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Eternal Kiss

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 04:53:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Bleed for me,
Sweet crimson lamentations,
Scarlet screams of the monsters within…
Release them,
Control doesn’t matter anymore,
Succumb to me…

Icy caresses,
Kiss eternal,
Beautiful death…

Sacrifice yourself to my Immortal touch,
Proclaim your love, bittersweet whispers in my ear…
Let me teach you the art of pleasurable pain,
Claws dragging down your back,
Fangs seeping into your skin,

You are mine…

Reveal every hidden desire,
Fall helpless under my spell..
Come, mere mortal,
And give me your life…
Scream my name,
Ah, such a pain-filled harmony…
Bear my mark,
Etched mercilessly into your chest,

BLOOD FLOWER…

Awaken, my child,
The night awaits us,
Embrace the darkness,
It is who you are now… forevermore…

VAMPIRE...

Copyright Â© FleurdeSang ... [ 2005-04-10 16:53:02]
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Re: Eternal Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:57:51 PM AEST
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You have written a few poems about the
"blood flower" I am not really sure what that is
or what it means, but it is definitely an
interesting basis for your poems. Anyway you
definitely draw the reader into your poems
and throw the him/her into the turmoil of your
emotions. I thought this poem was
awesome you definitely have an excess of
skill.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Eternal Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:30:49 PM AEST
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Great write Fleur....I love the emotions in this and the descriptions really put the reader in the midst of it all! Very, very good...merci.

Carol

Re: Eternal Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:50:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful interlude of darkness my mistress

of the macarbre . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Eternal Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 02:01:01 PM AEST
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You know this one just grabbed me ... right ?
Took me in and just ran icy fingers everwhere ... you do both, you and he ( the Hunter ) well here ... I could almost hear the whisper emanating from his crimson stained lips. Exquisite Stephy !!!

Nazzy ~

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