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Array ( [sid] => 9052 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Life [time] => 2002-12-22 05:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Strenuous thoughts run through my head
of ending life and me being dead
i think to myself would you are
do you even dare to see what i see
feel what i feel or live what i live
a glimpse of it is hell
watching the fire burn all around
waiting for it all to end
taking pleasure of other peoples pain
they laugh atme while i feel pain
but they will all be sorry in the end
as i stand above their corpse
laughing in hatred toward humanity. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 13 [informant] => death [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Life

Contributed by death on Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Strenuous thoughts run through my head
of ending life and me being dead
i think to myself would you are
do you even dare to see what i see
feel what i feel or live what i live
a glimpse of it is hell
watching the fire burn all around
waiting for it all to end
taking pleasure of other peoples pain
they laugh atme while i feel pain
but they will all be sorry in the end
as i stand above their corpse
laughing in hatred toward humanity.

Copyright © death ... [ 2002-12-22 05:00:00]
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Re: Life (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 02:55:23 PM AEST
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This is a very deep dark poem Death...do you even dare to see what i see feel what i feel or live what i live, i would personally go through anything for the one i love...no matter what i saw, had to go through or had to endure....it would all be worth it for the man i love...i think it's sad that people would laugh at anyone's pain...it would be more in my heart to want to heal and search and dig through the pain...and in the end if you were standing over that person laughin in hatred toward humanity.....i would cover your mouth.....thanks for sharing this one it has a very strong message deep inside ...one that touched me deeply....welcome to YPDC i look forward to reading more of your poetry....
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