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Array ( [sid] => 90513 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dark Fate [time] => 2005-04-10 15:18:29 [hometext] => this one also came to me during a test. not WKCE, but the teacher was furious to find me writing a dark poem instead of an essay on some stupid worthless book character. [bodytext] => shadows shifting
no light in the dark
eyes watching, always watching
glimmer in the night
tendrils of a cold breeze
seek out the living
so the hidden horror
can add you to the dead
screeches of agony come from below
as painful cries rip the silence
all is black, deadly black
there is no light to pierce the darkness
you close your eyes
but you see red
red and black
black and red
the evil is back
and you are dead [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 13 [informant] => PuppyChow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Dark Fate

Contributed by PuppyChow on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 03:18:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

shadows shifting
no light in the dark
eyes watching, always watching
glimmer in the night
tendrils of a cold breeze
seek out the living
so the hidden horror
can add you to the dead
screeches of agony come from below
as painful cries rip the silence
all is black, deadly black
there is no light to pierce the darkness
you close your eyes
but you see red
red and black
black and red
the evil is back
and you are dead

Copyright © PuppyChow ... [ 2005-04-10 15:18:29]
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Re: Dark Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 02:45:50 AM AEST
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wonderful:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Dark Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:10:57 PM AEST
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wow that shot me in the heart
so ..soo...i dont know what to say
it left me speechless
wonderful write
and i know what you mean when people dont comment that much anymore
--> Rae

Re: Dark Fate (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th August 2005 @ 02:37:28 AM AEST
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Well, I don't know about your teacher, but I thought it was great. Reminded me of a voice-over for a dark movie trailer and brought up all sorts of images. Very cool!

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