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Array ( [sid] => 90504 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Got A Hold On Me [time] => 2005-04-10 12:44:08 [hometext] => A steamy write..enjoy [bodytext] => Love you’ve got a hold on me,
I am yours not wanting to be free,
I drink you in through all my pores,
For you I will be a heavenly whore.

Sex with you is hot & so steamy,
Your juices are so luscious & creamy,
I can never get enough of your love,
You fit inside me like a hand in a glove.

I have never, ever felt this way,
Come inside me & have your play.
I am yours to do with what you will,
Only stop when you had your fill.

My moans are for you & you only,
I grind gently as you lick me slowly,
Tempting you with my raw desire,
As I ride you I take you higher.

I love it when you are so deep inside,
Our own sexual retreat where we both hide,
Our hot bodies move together,
In our bedroom is some scorching weather.

Not for the timid the things that we do,
My breasts stuck to your body like glue,
I see the look in your wild eyes,
I give in more as I hear your excited cries.


[comments] => 7 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 2 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
You Got A Hold On Me

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:44:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Love you’ve got a hold on me,
I am yours not wanting to be free,
I drink you in through all my pores,
For you I will be a heavenly whore.

Sex with you is hot & so steamy,
Your juices are so luscious & creamy,
I can never get enough of your love,
You fit inside me like a hand in a glove.

I have never, ever felt this way,
Come inside me & have your play.
I am yours to do with what you will,
Only stop when you had your fill.

My moans are for you & you only,
I grind gently as you lick me slowly,
Tempting you with my raw desire,
As I ride you I take you higher.

I love it when you are so deep inside,
Our own sexual retreat where we both hide,
Our hot bodies move together,
In our bedroom is some scorching weather.

Not for the timid the things that we do,
My breasts stuck to your body like glue,
I see the look in your wild eyes,
I give in more as I hear your excited cries.






Copyright © pixie ... [ 2005-04-10 12:44:08]
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Re: You Got A Hold On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:49:51 PM AEST
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Wow well done


Re: You Got A Hold On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 03:06:17 PM AEST
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Nice write pix . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: You Got A Hold On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:06:59 PM AEST
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A very thought provoking piece Pixie.
You've written and expressed it so well.
A great write.
Hugs,
~Sue~


Re: You Got A Hold On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:40:10 PM AEST
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damn girl wow... I think steamy is a very good
way to describe this mmm wow I'm not quite
sure what to say.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: You Got A Hold On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by hrpuffnstuff on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:18:13 PM AEST
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hey krissy hammer house of horror meets love .
great write
i hope that is how you feel
love (and i really mean it) hxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


Re: You Got A Hold On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:36:45 PM AEST
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*jaw dropped* Damn girl! You tryin to turn me on? LOL. This was definately steamy, you weren't lying. I loved it. But now I feel like I need to go get some. Loves it!!!


Re: You Got A Hold On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 12:11:26 PM AEST
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LOL Someone turn on the A/C....Loving the detail! hehe. *runs out to find a man*

Scorp ; )




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