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Array ( [sid] => 90502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Were All I Had [time] => 2005-04-10 12:21:26 [hometext] => PLEASE comment, I am new at this! I don't think it's very good, but what the heck. Please read, and I have some other poems that are better than this, if you are interested... [bodytext] => Was it real, with you and me?
Did you ever really hold me tight?
Through our sorrows and our tears?
Through our pain and our fright?

It seems so very long ago
When there was kindness in your eyes
When you looked at me with love and kindness
Was it just a disguise?

No, you truly loved me
When I think of your sweet embrace I cry
You cared for me, and I for you
Now I just want to die

You left me all of a sudden
One day you just didn't care
Soon your insensitiveness turned to abuse
My love turned to despair

I think about it all the time
Was it my fault that you turned?
It must have been something I did
You just gave me what I earned

It WAS my fault
For you are still funny, kind, gentle
To the other people around me
(Oh, I am so jealous!!!!)
Only to me are you harmful

Every time you abuse me I forgive you
From you I just want comfort!
My heart, so young, is so bitter and black
Why is it me whom you must hurt?

Please just tell me what I did
I swear I won't stop until I fix it
I'll do whatever it takes for you to love me again
To you I wholeheartedly submit

You must understand the pain
That you put this young girl through
Why did you turn on me?
What did I ever do?

I do still love you, I always have
All I want is to be in your care
To know that I am safe and loved
Then my pain I could bear

But without you I am nothing
My wounds grow deeper from you
My family is gone- YOU WERE ALL I HAD!!!
Death is better than this! That is what I will do

Not that you would care
That is what I want to know
What if I killed myself?
Would you feel the slightest woe?

WOULD ANYONE? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 48 [informant] => NightOwl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
You Were All I Had

Contributed by NightOwl on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:21:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Was it real, with you and me?
Did you ever really hold me tight?
Through our sorrows and our tears?
Through our pain and our fright?

It seems so very long ago
When there was kindness in your eyes
When you looked at me with love and kindness
Was it just a disguise?

No, you truly loved me
When I think of your sweet embrace I cry
You cared for me, and I for you
Now I just want to die

You left me all of a sudden
One day you just didn't care
Soon your insensitiveness turned to abuse
My love turned to despair

I think about it all the time
Was it my fault that you turned?
It must have been something I did
You just gave me what I earned

It WAS my fault
For you are still funny, kind, gentle
To the other people around me
(Oh, I am so jealous!!!!)
Only to me are you harmful

Every time you abuse me I forgive you
From you I just want comfort!
My heart, so young, is so bitter and black
Why is it me whom you must hurt?

Please just tell me what I did
I swear I won't stop until I fix it
I'll do whatever it takes for you to love me again
To you I wholeheartedly submit

You must understand the pain
That you put this young girl through
Why did you turn on me?
What did I ever do?

I do still love you, I always have
All I want is to be in your care
To know that I am safe and loved
Then my pain I could bear

But without you I am nothing
My wounds grow deeper from you
My family is gone- YOU WERE ALL I HAD!!!
Death is better than this! That is what I will do

Not that you would care
That is what I want to know
What if I killed myself?
Would you feel the slightest woe?

WOULD ANYONE?




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Re: You Were All I Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Nos_Bunny on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:47:19 PM AEST
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I feel your pain....if this is reality, It all so true and painfull, to me this is the day to day expierence, you have talent for this and I sence more to come. May you succeed in life and steal the heart of your love. -Nos-


Re: You Were All I Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:53:36 PM AEST
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Very emotional write, Well written i felt your pain, Stay strong.


Re: You Were All I Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:31:40 PM AEST
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Wow... Very emotional. I loved it. It really shows the pain and confussion and the need you feel. Very good write. Keep it coming. Its great
Lauren


Re: You Were All I Had (User Rating: 1 )
by DanishPoet on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:57:21 PM AEST
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Well written. I know that nothing I can say will help, but I really feel with you.
May we all find our love.

DanishPoet


Re: You Were All I Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:16:34 PM AEST
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Wow! this is very heart wrenching. Any person who beats up some one because he is unhappy does not understand love or communication


Re: You Were All I Had (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:22:41 PM AEST
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Aww This is sad, heart breaking and such an emotional write. I'm so sorry for ur pain and I only know too well about the pain and suffering ur going through. Hang tuff my friend. A truly very well written and expressed poem.
Hugs,
~Sue~
PS If u need me pm me my friend.


Re: You Were All I Had (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 12:37:23 AM AEST
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Well written,emotional write!! This is so honest and heartfelt, I feel you

Leia




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