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[aid] => mick
[title] => My Ugly Face
[time] => 2005-04-10 10:37:06
[hometext] => PLEASE comment, I am new at this! I don't think it's very good, but what the heck. Please read, and I have some other poems that are better than this, if you are interested...
[bodytext] => "You're beautiful on the inside."
That's what all the pretty girls
Say to make the ugly ones feel better
It makes me want to hurl
Because no one bothers to look inside
All they see is my ugly face
Blemishes, a nose too big, hair not right
Nothing to show my inner grace
First impressions are very important
But mine are always screwed
People never see look beyond my looks
Their opinions, right off, are skewed
My body is thin, but it's thin all over
How will I survive high school?
Even though I wear cool clothes and talk the talk
I'm not pretty, so I'm labeled "Not Cool"
The emphasizing of teens today
Is unfair for those of us who don't fit
Into their category of physical beauty
Cuz if we aren't in, then we're "Misfits"
Sure, I'm the brightest kid in my class
I'm funny, kind, and witty
But none of this matters in the least bit
Because I'm not pretty.
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 173
[topic] => 61
[informant] => NightOwl
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[alanguage] => english
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[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
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My Ugly Face
Contributed by
NightOwl
on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:37:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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"You're beautiful on the inside."
That's what all the pretty girls
Say to make the ugly ones feel better
It makes me want to hurl
Because no one bothers to look inside
All they see is my ugly face
Blemishes, a nose too big, hair not right
Nothing to show my inner grace
First impressions are very important
But mine are always screwed
People never see look beyond my looks
Their opinions, right off, are skewed
My body is thin, but it's thin all over
How will I survive high school?
Even though I wear cool clothes and talk the talk
I'm not pretty, so I'm labeled "Not Cool"
The emphasizing of teens today
Is unfair for those of us who don't fit
Into their category of physical beauty
Cuz if we aren't in, then we're "Misfits"
Sure, I'm the brightest kid in my class
I'm funny, kind, and witty
But none of this matters in the least bit
Because I'm not pretty.
Copyright ©
NightOwl
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2005-04-10 10:37:06]
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Re: My Ugly Face
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by Pats4eva7 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:30:08 AM AEST
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You shoudnt underestimate your talent, I thought this was a very good poem, full of truth and honesty. And though I dont know what you look like, Im sure you're very beautiful regardless of what you or what other people think. So keep your head high and keep writing!
~*~melissie~*~ |
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Re: My Ugly Face
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:56:47 AM AEST
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| A very sincere write here, and as an introduction to you and your works, was very impressive. This was spoken with a level of sincerity that helped to convey your emotions to the reader that much easier, and I can only hope high skool will be the roller coaster ride for you that it continues to be for me. Sure, it may have ups and downs, but who doesnt like a good roller coaster ride??? :P But anyways, great write here, keep this kind of stuff coming. |
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Re: My Ugly Face
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:11:54 PM AEST
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Well its a interesting write however pretty faces dont alway yield ideal people. Beauty comes from within. Even the most disfigured person and there are many, are labled ugly. They are the caring and the kindess souls .
You sound like you are still a youngin ,give it time, you will bloom into to a flower you were meant to be . Teenage hood is all part of what your future self will be. Stay strong -you dont need to be any more then what is important to you.
Whisper |
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Re: My Ugly Face
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by Tru2Myself on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:41:08 PM AEST
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Who cares if your not pretty? If you have a good personality then people will like you. And the people who don't are shallow and retarded and you dont want to be friends with them anyway. "Cool" what a word... have you noticed that all the "cool" people are *****?? Dont worry about it. Dont change yourself to fit in... be yourself!!
Lauren |
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Re: My Ugly Face
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by Tru2Myself on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:42:34 PM AEST
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| I meant to also put in that this really was a good poem. but dont worry about what people think. |
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Re: My Ugly Face
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by sick_n_twisted on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 03:17:01 PM AEST
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| hey...nice poem i loved it when i was reading this i was thinking like this is so right honestly my friend well so called friend said how old is she i was like guess then she said 14 i was like no shes 11 and she was haning around with a 11 year old and and she didnt mind b4 when she thought she was 14 cause shes funny and smart but shs like i dont see as the same person and she stoped hanging around with her well its not the same thing but almost i dont know it really ***** me off my point is you have to be a certain person to fit in i wrote a poem called different it says stuff all about that well nice poem i really loved it thats something i can seriously relate to cause im different then everyone in my class well bye |
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Re: My Ugly Face
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by bernard on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 03:23:51 AM AEST
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| Beauty is only skin deep it is the character of a person that counts not how well formed the face was, is. Keep smiling from bernard. |
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Re: My Ugly Face
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by girltranscended on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:37:31 PM AEST
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You know what, after high school, all of that crap fades, the unpopular have lives too and the pretty suffer just like everyone else.
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