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Array ( [sid] => 90472 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If Only Yesterday Would Never Have Survived [time] => 2005-04-10 02:28:46 [hometext] => I decided to write a poem again. [bodytext] => If the world would have ended yesterday
Then today would never have been revealed
One wouldn't have to feel guilty
While the rest have moved on
The tears wouldn't have been cried
If only yesterday would never have survived

The lovely sound of laughter
Arising during dinner
Of things that are too funny you may even start to cry
The feeling of emotion
I felt I had to hide
Nothing would be so secretive
If yesterday would never have survived

The wishes that you once had
Don't seem accomplishable anymore
The dreams that once ran across your mind
Will just stay locked inside
But it would all be just fine
If yesterday would never have survived

Through all the hurt that is inside
Sadness and guilt that shouldn't be felt
Yet it all is felt anyway
This is just a sign of yourself slowly fading away
But there wouldn't be any worries
If only yesterday would never have survived

I guess this all just shows that when today comes to an end
Even though it is clear that if yesterday would never have survived
Today would not have happened
And everything would be alright
So new wishes and dreams now will arise
As you hope not for the past to change
But for tomorrow to survive [comments] => 8 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 43 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
If Only Yesterday Would Never Have Survived

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:28:46 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



If the world would have ended yesterday
Then today would never have been revealed
One wouldn't have to feel guilty
While the rest have moved on
The tears wouldn't have been cried
If only yesterday would never have survived

The lovely sound of laughter
Arising during dinner
Of things that are too funny you may even start to cry
The feeling of emotion
I felt I had to hide
Nothing would be so secretive
If yesterday would never have survived

The wishes that you once had
Don't seem accomplishable anymore
The dreams that once ran across your mind
Will just stay locked inside
But it would all be just fine
If yesterday would never have survived

Through all the hurt that is inside
Sadness and guilt that shouldn't be felt
Yet it all is felt anyway
This is just a sign of yourself slowly fading away
But there wouldn't be any worries
If only yesterday would never have survived

I guess this all just shows that when today comes to an end
Even though it is clear that if yesterday would never have survived
Today would not have happened
And everything would be alright
So new wishes and dreams now will arise
As you hope not for the past to change
But for tomorrow to survive




Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2005-04-10 02:28:46]
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Re: If Only Yesterday Would Never Have Survived (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:35:12 AM AEST
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The words in your write was absolutely amazing. I felt each word penetrate my insides as if I were the writer. Thank you for sharing your insides with us.


Re: If Only Yesterday Would Never Have Survived (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:38:58 AM AEST
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Ah...great job Amy..really took the time to think it out...great job and very thought provoking...=]

Clark


Re: If Only Yesterday Would Never Have Survived (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 06:36:07 AM AEST
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Good writing and very thought provoking.
keep wriitng.
luv,hugs,
emy


Re: If Only Yesterday Would Never Have Survived (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:33:50 AM AEST
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Im glad you wrote this....I enjoyed reading it!
I even had to re read each line ...so I could think how it went in my mind then re read it again so I could grasp it totally....you are an amazing poet to be able to think ....and write like this...ta!~
cheers!~


Re: If Only Yesterday Would Never Have Survived (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 07:39:13 AM AEST
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Amy, this was such a well composed write.
You have captured so much feeling into this, im really proud of you sweetie.
I'm glad you're writing again tho, i have missed you're poems.

Love ya,
Janey


Re: If Only Yesterday Would Never Have Survived (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 04:30:40 PM AEST
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Hey Amy, I really like the concept of this poem. I especially like:
I guess this all just shows that when today comes to an end
Even though it is clear that if yesterday would never have survived
Today would not have happened
And everything would be alright
So new wishes and dreams now will arise
As you hope not for the past to change
But for tomorrow to survive

Good job Amy...I am so glad you posted...keep writing!
((hugs))
Carol


Re: If Only Yesterday Would Never Have Survived (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:01:47 PM AEST
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wow, this is deep and thoughful. I really enjoyed it, now I am off to ponder on your thoughts. Great job!


Re: If Only Yesterday Would Never Have Survived (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:44:09 PM AEST
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Very creative, I can tell you put a lot into this. You are really becomeing an amazing poetess! Loves it!!!




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