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Array ( [sid] => 90451 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Locked Away [time] => 2005-04-09 18:30:14 [hometext] => Read and Comment [bodytext] => Oh how I long To live
To go out and play
But to the place I am chained
I stay

How I long to breathe
As you do
To kiss the morning light
To taste the morning dew

Locked away
With only my fear
The torture is to be so far from it
Yet so so near

Ending my life
Would not do
It would not destroy
The pain I go through

Because Death
I realise
Is just another torture
High above the skies...

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Locked Away

Contributed by Dying_Angel on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 06:30:14 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Oh how I long To live
To go out and play
But to the place I am chained
I stay

How I long to breathe
As you do
To kiss the morning light
To taste the morning dew

Locked away
With only my fear
The torture is to be so far from it
Yet so so near

Ending my life
Would not do
It would not destroy
The pain I go through

Because Death
I realise
Is just another torture
High above the skies...

Copyright © Dying_Angel ... [ 2005-04-09 18:30:14]
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Re: Locked Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:14:43 PM AEST
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If i were not in the disposition that I am, than perhaps I would not have thought of Vampirism whilst reading through this.
My justification lies with the last line...in reference to the sun?
Perhaps I have misinterpreted?
Regardless I very much like this piece.
Less is more...you have proved this notion, within this piece.
As well as incorporated vivid imagery
Well done.

Re: Locked Away (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 10:59:50 PM AEST
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i love this poem and i want to keep rereading it it is awsome

Re: Locked Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Onslaught on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 06:07:33 PM AEST
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"Ending my life
Would not do
It would not destroy
The pain I go through

Because Death
I realise
Is just another torture
High above the skies..."

Wow, damn, nice. THat was brilliant. I wish I had thought of those lines. Well done. So true. So what are people like us supposed to do? If no where in life or in death are we safe from pain?

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