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Array ( [sid] => 90447 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How? [time] => 2005-04-09 18:08:25 [hometext] => This was written when I first discovered the abounding lies and deceit. [bodytext] => How?
Azanna (12-14-04)


How can I repay you for this hurt you have given me?
Oh...
That I could
I'd give you such exquisite misery

How do I make you realize what truly you have done?
Embracing darkness
Blackened heart
Your face turned from the sun

How will you atone to a loving heart which you have torn asunder?
Now a heap of ash
Whilst you go forth
In search of further plunder.

How can I repay you for every premeditated lie?
Which fell so smoothly
From your lips
An ever ready alibi

How could you not ever see that I had given you my all?
Your eyes now blinded
Where once you caught me
Now I fall

How can you not know that you have taken away my trust?
With deceiving ways
A silvered tongue
Our love, once dear, now turned to rust.

How could I not know that I was so foolishly naive?
Just one chance
To turn back time
So I never would believe

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How?

Contributed by Azanna on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 06:08:25 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



How?
Azanna (12-14-04)


How can I repay you for this hurt you have given me?
Oh...
That I could
I'd give you such exquisite misery

How do I make you realize what truly you have done?
Embracing darkness
Blackened heart
Your face turned from the sun

How will you atone to a loving heart which you have torn asunder?
Now a heap of ash
Whilst you go forth
In search of further plunder.

How can I repay you for every premeditated lie?
Which fell so smoothly
From your lips
An ever ready alibi

How could you not ever see that I had given you my all?
Your eyes now blinded
Where once you caught me
Now I fall

How can you not know that you have taken away my trust?
With deceiving ways
A silvered tongue
Our love, once dear, now turned to rust.

How could I not know that I was so foolishly naive?
Just one chance
To turn back time
So I never would believe

~ end




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Re: How? (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 07:10:49 PM AEST
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non fido amore, non fido di uomini.
i do not trust love, i do not trust of men.
great piece
thanks for sharing


Re: How? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:52:28 PM AEST
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You have found yourself a new stalker.
I cannot begin to express how emotional and powerful this piece is.
I am although sad to see that it had been produced as a result of sufferings and deep pains...for that i am sorry...yet you have great talent...and I am excited to see such talent, captured within your writings.


Re: How? (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:05:03 PM AEST
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i loove how u write its very...traditional and yet is so individual, its a greaat combo


Re: How? (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 06:16:35 AM AEST
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A strong and appropriately dark poem that serves as a window to your wounded heart, and, I'm sure, to the hearts of all of us who have shared your feelings.

Still, better words on a page then a serpent coiled within the chest. We'd neither love or hate or suffer if not for the delicious pain of it all.

Spike


Re: How? (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:46:53 AM AEST
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Amazing. Absolutely incredible!! I can really relate, having lost someone recently like this... not in body, but in spirit. This is an awesome piece!!!

*~Erin~*




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