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[aid] => mick
[title] => Fallen Tears...
[time] => 2005-04-09 07:12:26
[hometext] => Maybe one day my heart will feel love again
[bodytext] => Tears fall on my forlorn face
Trickling spontaneously leaving a trace
I still weep to this very day
Ever since you walked away
Our love was one shared by few
Now it's long gone as cold as the morning's
dew
I try to smile and play my part
But behind this smile lays a broken
heart
You were everything to me
But I guess it wasn't meant to be
It's been awhile now, but I can't forget
My heart is charred and full of fret
Seasons come and seasons go
Still the tears manage to flow
I hope in time my heart will heal
This anguish I hope to no longer feel
Until that day heads my way
Heart broken and miserable I shall stay
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 196
[topic] => 22
[informant] => mina-1
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 23
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => LostLove
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Fallen Tears...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 07:12:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Tears fall on my forlorn face
Trickling spontaneously leaving a trace
I still weep to this very day
Ever since you walked away
Our love was one shared by few
Now it's long gone as cold as the morning's
dew
I try to smile and play my part
But behind this smile lays a broken
heart
You were everything to me
But I guess it wasn't meant to be
It's been awhile now, but I can't forget
My heart is charred and full of fret
Seasons come and seasons go
Still the tears manage to flow
I hope in time my heart will heal
This anguish I hope to no longer feel
Until that day heads my way
Heart broken and miserable I shall stay
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-04-09 07:12:26]
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Re: Fallen Tears...
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by inoc on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 07:21:37 AM AEST
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Dry your tears....as I really hope that you DO find love again and I am sure you will....you sound like a caring lovable person and soon when you at least expect it ...that someone will step into your life
lovely poem.....5 stars!
cheers!~ |
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Re: Fallen Tears...
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 07:34:46 AM AEST
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| nicely done |
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Re: Fallen Tears...
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 08:43:58 AM AEST
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A lovely poem fill with sad emotions and yet
there is always hope 4 a better day 2 come
where love is concerned . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Fallen Tears...
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by pixie on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 01:12:41 PM AEST
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sadness and beauty rolled into one amazing poem *hugs*
well done Sue
pix xx |
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Re: Fallen Tears...
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by angel_eyes70 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 12:06:47 AM AEST
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| that poem was lovely, i used to feel that way about my ex-boyfriend, he was my everything, my first love. but it took me 2 years to get over him. now i talk to him everyday, although we are 1000 miles apart. we are such good friends now. he is my best friend. although i always think what it would be like to still be with him, it is a wonderful thing we shared. i tell him stuff like that too. maybe you and your ex will become closer jst as friends. you never know . and you will find someone else maybe the next person you love will be the one. you never know. good luck with your future boyfrieds and with your poetry. nice write! |
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Re: Fallen Tears...
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:15:33 AM AEST
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IT SOUNDS SO SAD,I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU A HAPPY HEART,& TAKE AWAY ALL THAT YOU'RE MAD,& GIVE YOUR LIFE A NEW LOVE & A FRESH HEART! THIS WAS SO PRETTY & & HAS ALOT TO BARE,SO I WISH UPON YOU A LOVE FILLED PRAYER!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!
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Re: Fallen Tears...
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:17:44 PM AEST
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| oh, how i feel the same way all of the time. truly wonderful poem sue. hopefully that day will come soon. =] |
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Re: Fallen Tears...
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by breny on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:32:55 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem.
It flows nicely and I'm in your position so I know how you feel.
This is very emotional and shows your true feelings.
Great write
~Brenna~ |
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Re: Fallen Tears...
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 03:34:52 AM AEST
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Sad but yet a masterpeice.
I know the feelings well.
Hang tuff, my dear friend as joy cometh in the morning.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Fallen Tears...
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by reflections on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:31:26 AM AEST
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A beautiful poem! Obviously from a loving person grieving from a love that once was, but is now adrift. Take care of your heart (you know it’s functioning from the pain you feel). A loving heart attracts love, just as surely as honey attracts bees.
-A Love For Mina-
When the written word is from the heart
You should never feel a tinge of fear
you were not born to be apart
from he, who soon will hold you near
If not the one for whom you grieve
then for a sweeter, stronger love
more than you give, shall you receive
from that ultimate Knight you're dreaming of.
Cheers
John
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