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pain
Contributed by
mnk_1112
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Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 03:51:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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silence spreads and cloaks my mind
my other thoughts are left behind
the image of your smiling face
breaks my heart at rapid pace
wanting you to breathe again
thinking of what you could have been
wondering if you were in pain
hurting to even say your name
dying inside just because you've passed
was I in your thoughts until the last?
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by mia on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 04:43:23 AM AEST (User
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It doesn't matter if the poem was short but it was sweet and thats the main thing that counts....nice poem |
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 06:27:48 AM AEST (User
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wow. amazing... well done |
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by badgurlinoz on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 06:50:17 AM AEST (User
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sorry to hear of your loss .
May time bring solice and sweet memories for you too remember your friend by .
Beautiful poem |
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 07:02:54 AM AEST (User
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There's nothing more painful than the demise of an unfinished life. I hope this poem gave you some cathartic release. If you don't get a chance to read it at the funeral, make a copy, wrap it around a rose, and put it on his grave next visit. I'm pretty sure he'd like it.
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:49:46 AM AEST (User
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I am so sorry for your loss...
*hugs*
Such a sad poem...
IIf you need someone to listen, I'm a PM away,
Phil |
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Re: pain
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 01:14:43 PM AEST (User
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a very sad poem I am really sorry for the loss of your friend *hugs*
take care
pix xx |
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