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Array ( [sid] => 9039 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Continue [time] => 2002-12-22 00:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Does anyone expect me to give up?
To just admit, all out in the open
The things I have done
Behind their backs and in front of their eyes
My life is full of lies

I crawl through the darkness
Where I go
I don't really know
And I try to fill the emptiness
Hiding my mistakes
Making it seem real, instead of fake

Sometimes, I hear banging in my ears
It overwhelms my mind
And erupts my fears

And sometimes
I try so hard not to cry
The tears burn my cheeks
I can only ask why

The world around us
So dirty with horror
Fills my tear stained eyes with dust
But despite the terror
I continue to pray
For a better day
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I Continue

Contributed by AngryBunny on Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Does anyone expect me to give up?
To just admit, all out in the open
The things I have done
Behind their backs and in front of their eyes
My life is full of lies

I crawl through the darkness
Where I go
I don't really know
And I try to fill the emptiness
Hiding my mistakes
Making it seem real, instead of fake

Sometimes, I hear banging in my ears
It overwhelms my mind
And erupts my fears

And sometimes
I try so hard not to cry
The tears burn my cheeks
I can only ask why

The world around us
So dirty with horror
Fills my tear stained eyes with dust
But despite the terror
I continue to pray
For a better day

Copyright © AngryBunny ... [ 2002-12-22 00:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Continue (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 02:44:33 PM AEST
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There's alot of hope and strength in this poem and it has a bold message in it...thanks for sharing this one ...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: I Continue (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 08:47:01 PM AEST
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theres nothing wrong with praying,,we all need someone and thats god,, never stop never give up,,believe in your self and all things are possible,,great message,,,strong one at that,,, spooky

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