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Remember
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 06:02:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Remember what I said
That cold afternoon
Remember how I felt
How i wanted to die soon
Remember what I did
That icy morning
Remember how I felt
When the idea started dawning
Remember what you said
That frozen night
Remember how you felt
You knew I was right
Remember everything
How I was so alone
So remember now
To write this on my Gravestone
Copyright ©
Dying_Angel
... [
2005-04-08 18:02:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by GurlyTye on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 06:10:37 PM AEST (User
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This is sad. it sent a chill down my spine... though i do like the was your words flow together.. Good write |
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Re: Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sirena on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 06:50:53 PM AEST (User
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Wow, thats so lonley and sad. Very good, I like it a lot. The poem I just wrote is so diffrent, please can you read and tell me what you think? >> Click here to read [www.your-poetry.com]. |
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Re: Remember
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mesano on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:34:53 PM AEST (User
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wow... eerie almost, nicely written, i like it, keep it up
-Nicki |
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