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Passionate Fear
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 04:40:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She closes in switching the lights off
He feels her close to him
His hearts saying no
But that doesn't control his limb
Her breathing is soft and smooth
He just wants to have her near
To hold her
He tries to express his fear
He's afraid to go through with it
Even after all he's learned
He really isn't sure
Why for this he had yearned
He knew she would do it
The fantasy was real
He knew after this
He'd have to tell her what he feels...
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Dying_Angel
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2005-04-08 16:40:05]
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Re: Passionate Fear
(User Rating: 1 )
by GurlyTye on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 05:53:33 PM AEST
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| I really liked this... it expresses... fear in giving into something you want so badley... its very moving. good write |
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Re: Passionate Fear
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by Phantomdream on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:53:29 PM AEST
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| This was well written...as for the subject matter...well, i'm not so sure.... |
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Re: Passionate Fear
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:45:39 PM AEST
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yeah...I did'nt like this much.....good just I didnt like it....boring and not very entertaining...but does express feeling well
Clark.. |
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