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Array ( [sid] => 90293 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wall of Ignorance [time] => 2005-04-07 23:00:15 [hometext] => This is a pretty final draft, but I'll keep working on it if you tell me to [bodytext] => Walls of Ignorance

The invisible barriers placed by hands.
My own quivering hands,
My own dreaded work of art.
Ignorance now separates me,
Me and my cheerful friends.
The kindness I feel is as fake as pyrite.
Solid walls of opaque black tourmaline,
Stand and blockade the way.
A concrete invisibility to all others,
A fox passing by silently.
Blazing hollowness being painted,
In my dire disfigured heart.
My bottomless hatred being merged,
A mixture of everything mistaken.
This world prevails as iron walls,
Covering all as a blanket of despair,.
Memories from the past embed,
Into the present and future.
Reminiscences haunt you as a phantom
Following you, trapping you, killing you,
Painfully, slowly, silently.
Hourly death over and over again,
Since its been here ever so long.
I’ve never heard anyone say,
I love you, I truly do. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Crimson_Valley [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Wall of Ignorance

Contributed by Crimson_Valley on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:00:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Walls of Ignorance

The invisible barriers placed by hands.
My own quivering hands,
My own dreaded work of art.
Ignorance now separates me,
Me and my cheerful friends.
The kindness I feel is as fake as pyrite.
Solid walls of opaque black tourmaline,
Stand and blockade the way.
A concrete invisibility to all others,
A fox passing by silently.
Blazing hollowness being painted,
In my dire disfigured heart.
My bottomless hatred being merged,
A mixture of everything mistaken.
This world prevails as iron walls,
Covering all as a blanket of despair,.
Memories from the past embed,
Into the present and future.
Reminiscences haunt you as a phantom
Following you, trapping you, killing you,
Painfully, slowly, silently.
Hourly death over and over again,
Since its been here ever so long.
I’ve never heard anyone say,
I love you, I truly do.

Copyright Â© Crimson_Valley ... [ 2005-04-07 23:00:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wall of Ignorance (User Rating: 1 )
by Justpoetic on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:12:43 PM AEST
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Man that's a hot write, I don't think you need to do anything else to it. It's done. I like I like

Justpoetic

Re: Wall of Ignorance (User Rating: 1 )
by lovestruck on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:00:02 PM AEST
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Will your poems are awesome!! great write!! i dont think you should do anything with it

Taylor

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