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[title] => The Monster Inside Us
[time] => 2005-04-07 22:32:45
[hometext] => Well I wrote this and got critiqued by a couple friends they thought it was good and reccomended me to submit to here, I made this because I had a really really bad day so well enjoy all comments are appreciated
[bodytext] => When you feel that feeling of anger and delight that feeling you get when no one knows your fright you are the monster that no one knows inside the pain grows you soon give into try to mold the monster now has hold you go to the place which the anger was first found you let loose one hundred rounds People try to run but you find yourself having fun its all over no more delight the monster has left the fight you see yourself shaking inside the remoarse is waking you cant live with this choice you hear a voice it wants to take your life you grab for the knife the monster hears your plea he doesnt agree you think then slit the wrists spit Your delight grows there is no more monster to hold [comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 59 [informant] => SilentMatt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
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