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[aid] => Mick
[title] => A Beautiful Pain
[time] => 2002-12-21 21:40:00
[hometext] => I wrote this the other night, its about a guy that i met, and weve grown rather close, and i really hope that something might happen between us, especially after the concert the other night.... This is the only love poem that ive ever written, so tell me what you think about it.
[bodytext] => This tortures me in the night
Because you do not see it
It shoots in the face of my worries
This longing has violently made me pregnant
I try to defend myself from the pains of birth
But this pain is beautiful like you
[comments] => 9
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[informant] => gequetscht
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[score] => 24
[ratings] => 7
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A Beautiful Pain
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gequetscht
on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 09:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This tortures me in the night
Because you do not see it
It shoots in the face of my worries
This longing has violently made me pregnant
I try to defend myself from the pains of birth
But this pain is beautiful like you
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gequetscht
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2002-12-21 21:40:00]
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Re: A Beautiful Pain
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by OreO on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 02:25:48 PM AEST
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Wow t his is quite different the way you put the longing has violently made me pregnant ...comparing it to new life...this is uniquely written and truly one of a kind....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: A Beautiful Pain
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by buchi on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:08:45 AM AEST
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| Oh those labor pains!!...but I found them excruciating and better forgotten... |
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Re: A Beautiful Pain
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by lilblkcat on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 02:09:42 AM AEST
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| wow. it was different and unique. I liked it alot. |
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Re: A Beautiful Pain
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:36:57 PM AEST
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| wow. good write. I didnt even notice how short it was. |
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Re: A Beautiful Pain
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by Fears on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 08:18:11 PM AEST
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wow...your poem is very short but is jam packed with emotion and meaning.
~FEARS~ |
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Re: A Beautiful Pain
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by ruthie1983 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 01:00:47 PM AEST
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| I like ur wording. good job |
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Re: A Beautiful Pain
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by scotsgirl on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:22:08 AM AEST
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| i love how you put out all your feelings and yet you just met this person. Sometimes we keep those feelings bottled up because its so soon but you put it out there in such a beautiful way... very good. i loved it. |
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Re: A Beautiful Pain
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:23:07 PM AEST
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| GOOD POEM I LIKE IT WELL DONE |
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Re: A Beautiful Pain
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by ShadowFox on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 02:52:49 AM AEST
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| Very unique, which is very beautiful. |
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