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Bruises on her thighs
Slashed hip bones
Scars on her wrists
She’s a mess, she’s a mess
Porcelain skin
Hollowed in eyes
A blank stare
She’s a mess, she’s a mess
Empty stomach
Vomit hidden
There’s a voice inside her head
She’s a mess, she’s a mess
The highs are so extreme
The lows are so severe
The silence is piercing
She’s a mess, she’s a mess
All the stories
All the lies
Don’t believe her
She’s a mess, she’s a mess
She’s running
She’s falling
She’s dying
Please don’t let her shatter
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she's a mess, she's a mess

Contributed by IMissYouTerribley on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:27:34 PM in AEST
Topic: self-harmpoetry

She’s a mess, she’s a mess
Bruises on her thighs
Slashed hip bones
Scars on her wrists
She’s a mess, she’s a mess
Porcelain skin
Hollowed in eyes
A blank stare
She’s a mess, she’s a mess
Empty stomach
Vomit hidden
There’s a voice inside her head
She’s a mess, she’s a mess
The highs are so extreme
The lows are so severe
The silence is piercing
She’s a mess, she’s a mess
All the stories
All the lies
Don’t believe her
She’s a mess, she’s a mess
She’s running
She’s falling
She’s dying
Please don’t let her shatter

Copyright Â© IMissYouTerribley ... [ 2005-04-07 22:27:34]
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Re: she's a mess, she's a mess (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:09:58 PM AEST
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This is awsome. The repetition helped a lt in creating the poem, though the last line seems a little out of place. otherwise, very nicely done.

Re: she's a mess, she's a mess (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:40:25 PM AEST
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That write made me stop in my tracks. Wow its very powerful. nuff said Keep writing III be looking for ya

Just me
Whisper

Re: she's a mess, she's a mess (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:54:52 PM AEST
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"I thought I commented on this when you posted it...sorry." this was a very touching poem and it speacks so true, (for those who do cause self-harm) yes it is like this and I hope that this is just you writing but if it isnt then I hope that you will get over you suffering soon. this was a good poem and if flowed well I do hope that you are able to write about other stuff as well and if so I wounld like to read it soon. Be well.

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